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delight my senses tonight
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sulphur Moon, fragile Twilight
and there You were, not quite Autumn dressed in fading Summer splendour offering gifts of fascination Temptress tantalise face of crimson Sunset, eyes of Eternal invitation Soul of wonder delight my Senses tonight |
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plans for tonight
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thank you teasingbrunette
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plans for tonight
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plans for tonight
lose mind to be found at a later date let 33 cups of tea go cold cursing every one get distracted from kitchen to bathroom to plants to guitar to the maddening creativity of over spontaneous spontaneity make a list of things to do never to be done talk to the room in various accents questioning more cups of tea gone cold determined to drink one thats hot only to be distracted mid sip by gentle call of books stacked since last crazy night day night sun up cast occasional glances at sentimental television that feels its been unloved for too long shave perhaps bath perhaps food perhaps not exit hurly burly watch sunrise stolen flowers gathered feathers then back to exit once more burly hurly in a whirlwind towards town towards day towards next night carrying scars through till sometime instant sleep |
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delicious audible seduction
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thank you RowBaby i`m liking your comments
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delicious audible seduction
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2kidsmom,kc0003 and teasingbrunette thank you its all very encouraging glad you liked it
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~ unadorned
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yet more excellent imagery
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delicious audible seduction
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thanks s1owhand, much appreciated
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delicious audible seduction
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This delicate night, delicious audible seduction.
Sounds I hear now... Gentle rain drumbeat on a thousand leaves,on blades of grass,on damp tarmac sloshing in puddles. Distant cry of many seagulls, in bursts, taking turns, louder, quieter, fading gently away. Breeze rustles tree... Drone of far away factory machinery... Seagulls more distant... Fridge buzzes into consciousness... Rain still pitter-patter... Hungry stomach rumbles, mumbling discontented... Solitary seagull... Pen scrapes across this paper, I breathe... Sounds I hear now... Delicious audible seduction, this delicate night. |
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Haikus
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glad to see haikus here, thank you
The bumble bees buzz, Around the sweet scented tree, In the evening Sun. As I watch the Moon, A spider walks across it, Weaving a new web. The condensation, For a moment with Sunlight, Glints ethereal. |
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Acoustic
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almost everything i listen to is acoustic, its just so beautifully real.
some acoustic essential listening : Davey Graham, Bert Jansch, Nick Drake "Pink Moon", Martin Simpson, Rorigo y Gabriella, all old blues, early John Martyn. and acoustic african music :Djelimady Tounkara, D`Gary, Rokia Traore Toumani Diabate with Ali Farka Toure "In The Heart Of The Moon" and "Ali and Toumani" for me it doesnt get any better than this. I could go on forever but I`ll stop now before I get carried away. |
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Blues Corner
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lightnin` hopkins - trouble in mind
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Blues Corner
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leadbelly - take this hammer
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sunsets of bliss
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rowbaby and teasingbrunette thanks for the kind comments, much appreciated
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sunsets of bliss
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toxic night that crawled into a sunset sublime,
a walk home by misty canal, two week stubble, amphetamine eyes that haven`t seen sleep for five short days. I was crazy at midnight, bleary eyed, tongue tied, bound for the east in adoration of a new moon. it was good to walk by the waters edge, lost in temptation, passive resistance, gentle surrender,a wingbeat away from eternity. in this time of reckless persuasion softly fall the nights of abandon. placid sunsets crawl slowly home, sunsets of bliss hold their breath. |
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~ when I was young......
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I just became a member today and then by chance wandered sceptical into this forum expecting nothing and then you assault my senses with pure brilliance. Thank you for reassuring me that good poetry is still alive. even that one line "i inhaled cinnamon mornings" is enough for me.such delicious description. thank you.
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