sponsored links

Community > Poems & Creative Writing

Topic: delicious audible seduction
geordiem Joined Fri 07/02/10 Posts: 15	Wed 07/07/10 07:56 PM
This delicate night, delicious audible seduction. Sounds I hear now... Gentle rain drumbeat on a thousand leaves,on blades of grass,on damp tarmac sloshing in puddles. Distant cry of many seagulls, in bursts, taking turns, louder, quieter, fading gently away. Breeze rustles tree... Drone of far away factory machinery... Seagulls more distant... Fridge buzzes into consciousness... Rain still pitter-patter... Hungry stomach rumbles, mumbling discontented... Solitary seagull... Pen scrapes across this paper, I breathe... Sounds I hear now... Delicious audible seduction, this delicate night.

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Wed 07/07/10 09:09 PM
write on

geordiem Joined Fri 07/02/10 Posts: 15	Thu 07/08/10 07:01 AM
thanks s1owhand, much appreciated

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Thu 07/08/10 07:54 AM


kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Thu 07/08/10 10:46 AM
nicely done

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Thu 07/08/10 11:03 AM
like it and the title teasingbrunette

geordiem Joined Fri 07/02/10 Posts: 15	Thu 07/08/10 03:42 PM
2kidsmom,kc0003 and teasingbrunette thank you its all very encouraging glad you liked it

RowBaby Joined Fri 01/22/10 Posts: 11819	Thu 07/08/10 04:13 PM
I'm liking your stuff geordiem

geordiem Joined Fri 07/02/10 Posts: 15	Fri 07/09/10 05:21 PM
thank you RowBaby i`m liking your comments

Community > Poems & Creative Writing