Nicki im sowwy hun .....whats upp?

Everyone please comment on my poems Ive submitted please....Id like to know what everyone thinks





I once saw a child with big blue eyes,
I once saw a child with black and blue eyes
I once saw a child playing with barbie dolls,
I once saw a child staring at the walls
I once saw a child who liked to read books page by page,
I once saw a child much too old for her age
I once saw a child much too old for her age, I once saw a child who's face would confirm your worst fears
I once saw a child who just wanted to play all day long,
I once saw a child who heard sirens all day long
I once saw a child with many hopes, dreams, and goals,
I once saw a child whos dreams were shattered long ago
I once saw a child that everybody knows,
I now see a child everybody thinks they know

Nicki #2 never intruding always welcome

nm really boreddd outs my mind ready to scream....LOL

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HELLO

Thanks everyone please leave me comments telling me what you think of this poem its one of my favorites

Ahh so ur the one shes enjoy tlknig to because you make her laugh so muchh

Today I found a friend,
Who knew everything I felt.
She knew my every weakness,
And the problems I've been dealt.

She understood my wonders,
And listened to my dreams.
SHe listened to how I felt about life and love,
And knew what it all means.

Not once did she interupt me,
Or tell me I was wrong.
She understood what I was going through,
And promised she'd stay long

I reached out to this friend
To show her that i care
To pull her close and let her know
How much I need her there

I went to hold her hand
To pull her a bit nearer
And realized that this perfect friend I found
Was nothing but my mirror.

Im listening to the same song fo r da 3rd time now...Its gettin annoying

joshyfox----I think you talk with my cousin Stephanie?

All I ever get from you now is an "I love you" and "good bye"
You used to tell me you loved me and you would never make me cry
You said that you would always be there for me until the day you died
Then you just went and left us like a bird leaves the sky
I always did look up to you, because I was daddy's girl
I trusted you with everything, to me you meant the world
Now the years have passed so quickly, you didn't see me grow
You knew how much you meant to me, so why did you just leave and go?
Now I'm not so little anymore, I'm grown to be a lady
All that I wished to be was daddy's little baby
Although all wishes may not come true
I just want you to know that I will still always love you.

I would give a beatiful ring.....And it deff wouldnt be fake

Nicki #2 hello im Chris

Ok this is a new poem I wrote everyone tell me what you think pleaseee......







My life is falling apart
how many days a week must I cry?
Six? All seven?
The jobs are gone
the parents are splitting
brothers are moving on
while the sister considers college, but,
I, I cry.
I, I am lonely. Tired. Sick. Bored.
I have nothing and no one.
"They", in the world, are happy,
but, I,
am broken and brokedown.
I want to, I need to
run away and get away
from the pain and stress
the hate and rage.
Where am I?
Who am I?
Will I ever know?

Never Nicki....
Im juss exhausted widd school and everything yu knoww

*OUCH*....

I juss literally walked into a glass door...forgettin it was there

Cleaned my room earlier but sure ill do ya dishes....But ya gotta apy me....

Ughh I really wanna go out tnite but nobody round

Pounces on HBB