I’m A Fool


Sprinkles of white glided down from the sky,
A blanket of snow covered the ground,
He walked along alone,

A woman walked past,
They glanced at each other,
Suddenly,
Standing still lost in each other’s eyes,

Every heartbeat felt,
Surging through each others body’s,
Every sensation intensified,

Their hands flowing with energy,
Sparks flying as a gentle strokes across her face,
Yet smooth and calming,

Her soft lips united with his,
Energy flowing through each other,
A pure feeling lost in time,
Not feeling the world around them,
Lost in each others world of noir kissing,

He pulled away after only a seconds,
Which felt like an eternity,

A glass tear from her eye,
Her lips moved,
“I don’t believe in love it’s for fools”
She ran away,
Leaving footsteps in the snow,

He walked away,
Disheartened,
He murmured,
“I’m a fool then, since I’m in love.”

Then they both were gone,
Nothing left but footsteps in the snow,
And a tear drop frozen,
Standing for a love that was lost.

i like the imagery... the ending is pertaiculary my fravit part since its just a perfect way to end it... good write =] ,

The Heartless Night


The sun descended across the sky,
Warmth slowly diminished,
Coldness engulfed the city,

He sat there pondering alone,
His frail heart beating weak,
Cold,
Alone,

He stood up,
Walking by the river,

Shattered memory’s reflected,
He gazed into them,

Drawn into the lies,
False memory’s that was,
Yet wasn’t true,

The lie,
A misguided view of love,
Yet was it love or the idea?

For he searched for love,
So did he see it in a lie,
Or bitter words,
From a broken heart,

A pain to the heart,
He fell to his knees,
Seized his chest,

His heart full of pain once again,
Not truly knowing why,
Both wishing it to be the end,
Yet not to be,

The darkness engulfed him,
The night tormenting his mind,

On his knees he closed his eyes,
Holding the pain in,
Not letting anyone see,
He stood,
Walking by the river once more,
The moon smiling in the reflection,
Watching,
Waiting,

He alone just walked,
With the weak heart,
Shattered memory’s,
Eternally in pain,
Not knowing when it’s his last breath,
Hoping it soon,
Praying for it,
Yet wishing it never to pass.

wouldnt say it was hurtfull or anything... just more annoying that it like playin games.... its over either make firends or dont talk dont say one and do the other... lol

yeah i guessed that by now.... t.y.... i think not getting closure is the worst thing... but in the end where you really get that is in yourself by understanding it wasnt your fault and moving on.... :) thank you... i like knowing where i stand on things...

how come it allways seems to end bad..... i know i'm young so i'm asking lol... i never got angry or argued or anything and when it ended they first said they wanted to be friends.... so i said okay and tried to be a friend and then they just go off on one having ago at you to leave them alone... so i do... but i just think its sad that they went off bitchin and stuff and couldnt be friendly... each time its been the same... does anyone know how just how to end it so your atleast on talkin terms or somthing... since i dont like bad feelings... or is it just somthing that has to happen...

i will read some... i allways keep an open mind... but what i gathered so far is that its just a typical teen book for gilrs mostly who want to think about that sort off stuff...

lmso... think thats the best thing sum1 cud off said after all that.... n people reading twilight... please.... childish fantasys about love... its pathetic... i mite not be able to spell but i aint no teen u will meet or hear off.. thanks allways a garentee with me.

well i didnt come on here to date or anythin just talk to people... i have had love,.. call me young but i'm wiser then i seem.... i mite be the start of a melodu but i'm jazz... i go where the music takes me... and it took me here to make friends and talk to people...

lmso fair enough.... least i know i am with my own kind.... :p....

why the shock to the mr nice guy thing lmso :D.... and its a real nice atmospere on here i really like it... gotta learn how to use it propperly but still gonna be fun

big boy pants on ( the ones with the rockets ) ... time to grow up :p... n well i was shy wen 1st came on but can see its so much niecer on here now....

flowers for me :'( ur too kind :D. ..... lol ty u all your all so friendly

soo... wanna ask summert.... is this site more far dating or is it socail.... since i would like the latter, lol... since i know i am screwed already at the 1st thing... :p

this sites kinda wierd... tbh make u feel safe tho.... n its penut butter jelly time :D ....

well you are very friendly which i like :) .... so i can cope with people bein a little scary aslong as there amusing aswel :D ....

lmso.... well it does seem there are a few interesting people.... :)

should i be lol.... i'm 18 .... and a mr nice guy and i have nobody... no friends really... only few people to talk to now n then online... and thats it... n worst now i am lookin at chat room ect .... make me sad or wat.. joinin summer tlike this... ??