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Edited by
jimz
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Thu 02/18/10 11:09 PM
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i love the triple beam
red breath in drawn cloud plowing through snowdrift i am falling above sky help me i am leaving the bride green where she drank moss i left my union dues i am in open weather help i am killing myself in the balloon covering fields i remember when i was young i could fly in my dreams |
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Compelling read jimz!! it made me think of dreams somewhere along the way while reading it and then I came to the last line" remember when i was young
i could fly in my dreams" Me too man, that's so cool and it doesn't happen for me anymore either THAT STINKS ON ICE!!! |
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Compelling read jimz!! it made me think of dreams somewhere along the way while reading it and then I came to the last line" remember when i was young i could fly in my dreams" Me too man, that's so cool and it doesn't happen for me anymore either THAT STINKS ON ICE!!! Oh I know it was the coolest, yeah and it doesn't happen anymore "stinks on ice" well, that is very poetic, may i use it |
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Edited by
s1owhand
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Fri 02/19/10 04:18 AM
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guess what king of dream i had last night? 
yep. |
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 That's jus mean s-hand
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guess what king of dream i had last night?
yep. 
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Hi Jim - was not trying to be mean - just struck me as
kind of wild that I awoke from a vibrant flying dream and then read your piece first thing this morning. It was kind of prophetic for me. I like this work. I enjoy all of your writing. So please don't take it the wrong way. You will have flying dreams again my friend and they will be surreal. Brwnkimba too. 
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I took it the right way, I was just giving you a hard time
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Ditto, I am not nor have I ever been thin skinned.
Peaceful Dreams to you Brotha s1owhand |
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like this write alot jimz...teasingbrunette
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