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Help finish my poem please
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The waves pound against the rocks
Your deep within my arms We left our past on Mingle Where I learned of all your charms And now that were together And everything is fine We only hope for happiness But that we'll see in time Our lonliness is banished At least for now it's true It seems our hope for happiness Looks real to me and you We'll try to stay together And almost never fight Be loyal to each other Do everything just right |
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Help finish my poem please
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Two young hearts, walking thru the woods
The sound of nature, feels as it should The warm summers sun, glissens thru the trees Such a beautiful sight, as they drop to their knees They can't resist, as they hold each other Like a new born child, held by it's mother They cuddle and fondle with sweltering bliss lips intermingled in a passionate kiss heartbeats pounding like primordial drums awakening fairies who live in the mums The animals halt their habitual play to gawk at the sight they don’t see every day With unriveled passion, like none ever seen The poundin continued, till she let out a scream In each others arms, holding now not so tight His lips gently kiss her, it was all just so right Your amazing she wispers, she catches her breath unable to speak, lays his head on her chest The animals go back, to their usual play These 2 young lovers, had a magical day. I changed wonderful to magical, I think it's better |
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I have an artificial leg
I ride a home built VW Trike for my main transportation. I've been playing the guitar and singing, off and on, since I was about 14. however, im not much better than I was at age 16 |
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I used to weigh close to 500 lbs. I play drums. but I don`t have a set no more. I like to make people laugh. Congrats on the major weight loss man, thats awesome ! |
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I have a very severe allergy to latex products In elementary and middle school, I was in special ed for no reason whatsoever without being tested then in high school I started taking advanced placement classes. I can lick my own elbow I'll get you for that elbo thing. I think my shoulder popped out for a moment. I give up, you win |
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Look! Fireworks!
Edited by
freeonthree
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Sun 07/04/10 10:02 PM
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It's 10:02pm now, and im hearing alot of fireworks
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Look! Fireworks!
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Yes the roof almost caught fire One of the downsides of the 4th, not to mention all the poor critters running for their lives. some getting hit by vehicles I agree I worry about the critters!!! I don't get the whole blowing things up and making noise deal. In my opinion, it's simply widespread animal abuse |
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Look! Fireworks!
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Yes the roof almost caught fire One of the downsides of the 4th, not to mention all the poor critters running for their lives. some getting hit by vehicles |
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Look! Fireworks!
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I havn't heard any yet, and the dogs not freaking out, so I guess not.
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So sorry to hear this. Prayers are in route from Red Bluff.
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Whats your favorite candy ?
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... A Dandy ... Failing that ... ... I will also be negotiated by pineapple and cherry gummies, dear Gawd!!! Sour, tart cherry anything ... A love fresh Euro style chocolates w/ coarse sea salt ... ... I'd another great fresh chocolate made w/ lavender recently ... Yummo ... I love See's Almond Squares ... Whole Foods has a great knock~off ... Pedestrian candybars? Almond Roca and Heath wins, Snickers is close in, behind them ... ... Had a PayDay the other day in honour of my dear departed Mamma, first one in decades and I shared it w/ my daughter, as if some sacred ritual ... Cuz it is! I rarely eat much candy, but there is nothing like it when the fancy takes hold ... Sorry about you mom hon |
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Whats your favorite candy ?
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peanut butter cups mmmmm! They don't make enough of those for me. I think I could live on the damm things |
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Morning person
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Night owl all the way here
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Am I asking for too much?
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No, you're not asking too much, but that's not the real problem. If you are like most women online nowadays you will never find this person because of not being able to get past the looks issue. You look at the pics and never see the person. Yes, looks are a part of the whole chemistry thing, but should only be a small part if you want a truly nice person that will like/love you as much in return. If looks are not your primary concern then it is likely you will find who/what you are looking for. Good Luck in your search. I'd be offended if I had the energy. Me too, Ruth Hmmm, well, I've started to type my thoughts regarding that reply and I just can't bring my words together succinctly enough to make my point. I’ll just call bullshiiiit! Oy! SillnSerious, there is someone for everyone and I hope you find the perfect guy for you! Don't settle for one reason or another. You deserve the whole package: looks, success, kindness, integrity and mutual admiration. The first 2 took me out of the race |
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Help finish my poem please
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That was fun
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favorite comedys...
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Airplane was awesome, and rapid fire fun
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Happy 4th of July stoners !
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Topic:
Help finish my poem please
Edited by
freeonthree
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Sun 07/04/10 05:48 PM
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Two young hearts, walking thru the woods
The sound of nature, feels as it should The warm summers sun, glissens thru the trees Such a beautiful sight, as they drop to their knees They can't resist, as they hold each other Like a new born child, held by it's mother They cuddle and fondle with sweltering bliss lips intermingled in a passionate kiss heartbeats pounding like primordial drums awakening fairies who live in the mums The animals halt their habitual play to gawk at the sight they don’t see every day With unriveled passion, like none ever seen The poundin continued, till she let out a scream In each others arms, holding now not so tight His lips gently kiss her, it was all just so right Your amazing she wispers, she catches her breath unable to speak, lays his head on her chest The animals go back, to their usual play These 2 young lovers, had a wonderful day. |
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Topic:
Help finish my poem please
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Two young hearts, walking thru the woods
The sound of nature, feels as it should The warm summers sun, glissens thru the trees Such a beautiful sight, as they drop to their knees They can't resist, as they hold each other Like a new born child, held by it's mother They cuddle and fondle with sweltering bliss lips intermingled in a passionate kiss heartbeats pounding like primordial drums awakening fairies who live in the mums The animals halt their habitual play to gawk at the sight they don’t see every day With unriveled passion, like none ever seen The poundin continued, till she let out a scream In each others arms, holding now not so tight His lips gently kiss her, it was all just so right |
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It's Been A Year
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Congradulations !
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