Two young hearts, walking thru the woods
The sound of nature, feels as it should
The warm summers sun, glissens thru the trees
Such a beautiful sight, as they drop to their knees
They can't resist, as they hold each other
Like a new born child, held by it's mother

Now help me finish it, next verses please

Two young hearts, walking thru the woods
The sound of nature, feels as it should
The warm summers sun, glissens thru the trees
Such a beautiful sight, as they drop to their knees
They can't resist, as they hold each other
Like a new born child, held by it's mother

They cuddle and fondle with sweltering bliss
lips intermingled in a passionate kiss
heartbeats pounding like primordial drums
awakening fairies who live in the mums
The animals halt their habitual play
to gawk at the sight they don’t see every day

Two young hearts, walking thru the woods
The sound of nature, feels as it should
The warm summers sun, glissens thru the trees
Such a beautiful sight, as they drop to their knees
They can't resist, as they hold each other
Like a new born child, held by it's mother

They cuddle and fondle with sweltering bliss
lips intermingled in a passionate kiss
heartbeats pounding like primordial drums
awakening fairies who live in the mums
The animals halt their habitual play
to gawk at the sight they don’t see every day

With unriveled passion, like none ever seen
The poundin continued, till she let out a scream
In each others arms, holding now not so tight
His lips gently kiss her, it was all just so right

Two young hearts, walking thru the woods
The sound of nature, feels as it should
The warm summers sun, glissens thru the trees
Such a beautiful sight, as they drop to their knees
They can't resist, as they hold each other
Like a new born child, held by it's mother

They cuddle and fondle with sweltering bliss
lips intermingled in a passionate kiss
heartbeats pounding like primordial drums
awakening fairies who live in the mums
The animals halt their habitual play
to gawk at the sight they don’t see every day

With unriveled passion, like none ever seen
The poundin continued, till she let out a scream
In each others arms, holding now not so tight
His lips gently kiss her, it was all just so right

Your amazing she wispers, she catches her breath
unable to speak, lays his head on her chest
The animals go back, to their usual play
These 2 young lovers, had a wonderful day.

That was fun

Two young hearts, walking thru the woods
The sound of nature, feels as it should
The warm summers sun, glissens thru the trees
Such a beautiful sight, as they drop to their knees
They can't resist, as they hold each other
Like a new born child, held by it's mother

They cuddle and fondle with sweltering bliss
lips intermingled in a passionate kiss
heartbeats pounding like primordial drums
awakening fairies who live in the mums
The animals halt their habitual play
to gawk at the sight they don’t see every day

With unriveled passion, like none ever seen
The poundin continued, till she let out a scream
In each others arms, holding now not so tight
His lips gently kiss her, it was all just so right

Your amazing she wispers, she catches her breath
unable to speak, lays his head on her chest
The animals go back, to their usual play
These 2 young lovers, had a magical day.

I changed wonderful to magical, I think it's better

Good job, good job both of you.

Very nicely done

two young hearts
share the soul of each other
as they tend to seek a dream
and the sounds of nature
shows them the way
to a new journey, as they tend
to watch the sunset go down but
the warmth of the beauty
that is all around.
as they tend to hold hands
and give each one a hug or two
with a deep sensation of a kiss
thinking there so young
nothing can really go wrong.
a birth of a child is now near
as learning a mistake comes
unfold.
as learning the beauty of a birth
and child they have a great bond
as the child is upon the chest and feeling
content where the world seem nothing
to this little one as a problem .
as every day is magical.
and as the animals they tend to see
in flash is just there animal guide
leading them a new beganing and way
as the animal that tends to come
there way is there guide that was ment to be

The waves pound against the rocks
Your deep within my arms
We left our past on Mingle
Where I learned of all your charms

And now that were together
And everything is fine
We only hope for happiness
But that we'll see in time

Our lonliness is banished
At least for now it's true
It seems our hope for happiness
Looks real to me and you

We'll try to stay together
And almost never fight
Be loyal to each other
Do everything just right

Thanks Ladylid !

your loneleness
shows how much of a bond you
have shared, as being torn apart
is not was ment to be
as you watch the sky
and time going by so fast
you keep watching and seeing
the changes that have gone
so fast in sight. as there
is always hope, as lonelness is
only a short term. as you look at the waves
you see your dream again re enter where
you had started from before.
as your child is now grown
as solid as you had remember from prior before
but you are now a family again. with better beganings
and learning more of each one

OK, this is fun, lets try another one

A tender kiss, a gentle touch, a whispered I love you
Is that too much to hope for, am I screwed up to you
I've memorized your face, I see it all the time
Why is it that you treat me, like im giving you a line

My heart is feeling empty, your face is always there
is it my lack of money, is it my lack of hair
I want so much to know you, and show you that im real
Im just to shy to message you, and tell you how I feel

I think were on a roll Queene123

who knows from right and wrong
when there has been so much pain in
the air
as each of us have experience many memories
love and tender all is rowe
as our lives come and they go
as its hard to say goodbye
when it not truly ment to be
as our kiss seem to be forever
as we all know. as we learn
to be patient as every where we tend to go
life brings up together for a purpose do to the
love that have cherished
as a kiss can become a pact of two souls
as having such emotions, where it can
make you feel at times fragile
but yet a magic of a kiss brings all the right
and nothing to make it a wrong

Nice one ! Im afraid your on your own now though hon, my brain is tired from thinking up words

I havn't thought that hard in years. lol

It's good for ya, your brain, your soul and your heart. Nice write(s).

Thank you Shasta