cool, thanks for the advice! i decided to start writing poetry becuase
it sounded like more fun than writing complex naratives...i am in AP
composition and literature so we write a lot...poetry sounded like fun
to try so thanks for the advice again!

yeah im fine...just had bad day...i'm very emotional at times. i thought
it would be a good idea to get it all out and i wanted to make them
sound pretty like professional poets write!

i love poetry and i wish i could get my thoughts down as beautifully as
everyone else does...this is my start! be honest!
"TO FEEL AND FEAR"
to feel alone when you are surrounded by friends
to fear social interaction because of the anxiety of speech mistakes
this is what i feel and fear
to feel like no one cares about you even when they say they do
to fear death when it is the only thing you desire
this is what i feel and fear
to feel overwhelmed by failure when you only want to succeed
to fear the darkness as it swells up inisde of you
this is what i feel and fear
the problem is that i fear what i feel

oh..lol thanks(PetiteKitten), im kinda new

sorry, i just added picts on my profile and i guess my profile pic
didn''t change but thanks...lol

i've been thinking cause i had a bad day...week...year...yeah lifes not
good but i just wanted to know. give honest opinion