Thank you

If hes a minor, i would start disciplining him really strictly, and tell him hes too young to even know about it. Confiscate everything, and educate him about it. Tell him how it can be harmful to him. Wow are you serious? 6? :(

God knows

Very professional. Good job

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Thanks, i am a big fan of evanessence, i wrote that poem a year before Amy Lee hit the record deal for that album :)

Reaction poem to "A single tear"

-A spirit of hope-

A few blue moons since
A few rainy days back
In this pained heart
Where shadows of people traced the snow
Where uncanny love left a trail
Of unrelenting storms
Hand in hand as they strolled
As end destined to become the past

Several sunny days thereafter
When the doused soul wavered
It seized to mourn; nor indulge in laughter,
For telling time had lost its flavor

Time told no less than one could bear
of unrequited love in a mirage down yonder
this blind soul, that deaf heart
this dam*ed spirit, that sold itself
the heart saw, the soul heard
the mind do thy bidding
Whilst I sit here and ponder,
if thee restless heart can last much longer...

So very true, can i post a reaction poem of mine to that please?

My insomnia says: It's Peanut butter Jelly time!

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That was phenomenal, and it entaled some of my thoughts about other couple having succeeding relationships in the midst of my life. Amazing words, thanks for sharing your poetry, PrettyredRose

-yosef

I lost my heart it's running alone,
To find it I do not know where.
I lost my breath its long since lost
Yet thinking who would care
So where am I standing alone?
Do I think this is where I belong,
Is this my shameful home?
I stand here, weak, not strong
Still the same, still in pain
All this shame with nothing to gain.
Whom do I write to as my soul weeps twice more?
Tell me who has the key, and to which door?
To feel that breath reviving my soul,
That bitter soul which once was a whole
Now is a vacant entity
A dream this is not, or so I was told
Befriend me not I have no heart
By that I mean a heart which is not torn apart
I rest my case but my case does not rest at this
The moon covers the sun like the dusk of an eclipse
-Yosef Copyright ©2009

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Hello everyone

I am new to mingle, i joined this site to make new friends, and share my poetry. I am new to the Los Angeles area! You can find me in the poetry forum =)

Thanks!