Topic: Breathe once more
Yosef90035's photo
Mon 05/25/09 03:04 AM
I lost my heart it's running alone,
To find it I do not know where.
I lost my breath its long since lost
Yet thinking who would care
So where am I standing alone?
Do I think this is where I belong,
Is this my shameful home?
I stand here, weak, not strong
Still the same, still in pain
All this shame with nothing to gain.
Whom do I write to as my soul weeps twice more?
Tell me who has the key, and to which door?
To feel that breath reviving my soul,
That bitter soul which once was a whole
Now is a vacant entity
A dream this is not, or so I was told
Befriend me not I have no heart
By that I mean a heart which is not torn apart
I rest my case but my case does not rest at this
The moon covers the sun like the dusk of an eclipse
-Yosef Copyright ©2009

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AngelLight's photo
Mon 05/25/09 07:44 AM
Nice...reminds me a little of the song by Evanescence called "Bring Me To Life." flowerforyou

Yosef90035's photo
Mon 05/25/09 08:44 AM

Nice...reminds me a little of the song by Evanescence called "Bring Me To Life." flowerforyou


Thanks, i am a big fan of evanessence, i wrote that poem a year before Amy Lee hit the record deal for that album :)

MzEm's photo
Tue 05/26/09 12:46 PM
Very heartfelt piece....

Yosef90035's photo
Tue 05/26/09 05:09 PM

Very heartfelt piece....


Thank you :smile:

no photo
Tue 05/26/09 05:54 PM
Very Nice Write flowerforyou

tanyaann's photo
Tue 05/26/09 06:15 PM
:thumbsup: Great Write!