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 We come here from every port and sea, For me to seek you and you to seek me. Searching through fibers of misery and pain trampling over hearts with our feelings falling like rain. Unward to its very core, tangled, intwisted and tore. Swollen its battered pulse still pounding As I slash away to release its ties so confining Free at last from this tomb of disperation Giving new breath of pure and sweet inspiration Now resurrected, I challenge this dragon of dispair Your torments cast down to the devil to bere. Standing with all this impowering thirst to feel Her presents and heart now very close and real Seeking to fill her soul and rush through her veins. Freeing her body of all past misery and pains. Coupled now as one, our souls joined together forever. TR.2008 |
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Very nice
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Wow iam- that was deep!
Good write! Felt the passion in it.  
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Very nice as always Terry!
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beautiful Terry...
U always know how to express...u are another gifted poet... 
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Ahh, Thank you so much for reading this and Zanne I wish...
L sis.,Miss T.,miss Fox.,
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T, this is beautifully done.
Absolute belief, willingness to learn from life's lessons and dance with what you have, and perfect timing = unbeatable combination. Nice write! |
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Simply beautiful
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To find the treasure you seek
is one that is rare but I asure you it's truly there In what we write we bare our souls we put it out here for everyone to know If she can't see us after we have shown what's inside then it will be her loss and her turn to cry... Very nice poem Terry, a lot of feeling in it.. Thank you my friend. May the Lord bless you and always keep you safe.. |
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Not Sorry, had to say this.....
Terry and Zanne.. you two would make a wonderful pair
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nice work here
good vision |
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Not Sorry, had to say this..... Terry and Zanne.. you two would make a wonderful pair  I thank you for your replies, here.. And as for Zanne, she'a one of the most BEAUTIFUL spirits here... But as to US,,,she might NOT feel your way,lol,lol But THANKS for seeing US,,,,
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another good read, bro--
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another good read, bro-- 
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Your soul shines so bright my friend...
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This was written very well TR. Keep up the thoughts.. you did a nice job
TAB |
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This was written very well TR. Keep up the thoughts.. you did a nice job TAB Ahhhh. THANK YOU MUCH....... 
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Not Sorry, had to say this..... Terry and Zanne.. you two would make a wonderful pair I just saw this... and why do you feel this way...????? |
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Not Sorry, had to say this..... Terry and Zanne.. you two would make a wonderful pair I thank you for your replies, here.. And as for Zanne, she'a one of the most BEAUTIFUL spirits here... But as to US,,,she might NOT feel your way,lol,lol But THANKS for seeing US,,,, Thats quite an interesting observation... I still ask... "WHY"???? Terry...
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