Topic: I will never know you | |
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You have come to this place
I extended my hand I hoped you would notice the kind of man that I am Without a warning without a goodbye you just went away which made me cry I felt so sad my heart was hurt because I could see that to you I had no worth What can I say what can I do when I saw you hurting I tried to comfort you Why do I do this why do I even try because i'm always left standing with tears in my eyes Why do women do this they say they're tired of games but when a real man comes along they just let him slip away Instead they choose the men with nothing better to do they tear you apart and never truly love you Now my fire is out I have no more to prove if you pass me by the blame is on you By Daniel 03/26/08 |
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oh dear... we arent all like that... but well written nonethe less
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There loss (((((((HUGZ)))))))
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You pass me once you pass me
twice but still im in the waitings maybe someday you will realize just what you have passed by For i was looking for a man the type of man you mention but yet you make me want to cry but now I know it aint you that I am looking for it is your type of heart that makes me want you so much that I just want to sit and cry for makeing myself such a fool to even making myself want to try... very nice write Danielson |
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oh dear... we arent all like that... but well written nonethe less I'm sure there are some that aren't, but it's been my experience, that beacuse of past relationships, we always have to walk in the shadow of what someone else has done, never getting the benefit of the doubt.. This can really apply to both men and women.. If we are here to really find that special someone.. then we all should really not prejudge someone without getting to know them first.. jmo.. |
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Thank you Flower, sas, nice addition to my poem...
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Daniel nice write, don't ever give up your dreams,any woman would be lucky to have you
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Daniel nice write, don't ever give up your dreams,any woman would be lucky to have you I'm sure there are many that would disagree with you, but thank you anyway.. |
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Daniel nice write, don't ever give up your dreams,any woman would be lucky to have you I'm sure there are many that would disagree with you, but thank you anyway.. There may be many that disagree but I'm not one of them... You are a wonderful man! Very heart felt write... Thank you! |
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Daniel... alot of us are walked right by... You are a treasure- and someday some lady is going to be really blessed with you in her life... |
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Daniel... alot of us are walked right by... You are a treasure- and someday some lady is going to be really blessed with you in her life... Thank you MsTeddy.. |
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