Topic: It can't be him
nightruler's photo
Tue 03/25/08 06:29 AM
There ain't much that I can say
that hasn't been said before
All I know that babe it's getting late
and theres a need I can't ignore
for some time now I've had this thought
that could destroy everything we have
and god knows if we get caught
every breath for you may be my last
I have seen you walk into my dreams
everynight I've spent alone in thoughts of you
I swear your touch was made for me
from another voice you hear I love you
It just cannot be,you made a mistake
that I would never put you down for
but I will remind you until my dying day
that I still love you more


It can't be his eyes,because I know
that theres someone else on his mind
It can't be his heart,you're not there
because you're somewhere deep in mine
It can't be love,it's so impossable
because you were meant for me
everynight you lay beside him in bed
you close your eyes,i'm all you see



I've been thinking as time passes me by
will you someday feel these words that I write
I wish for once you'd see things my way
You tell me you love him,I don't buy it
There are things you can't hide from me
because you wouldnt be here in my arms tonight
if that was something I could believe
and he doesnt say the things I say to you
he never tells you the words I swear are true
I don't mean no harm,but you know better than this
Does he fall to his knees the way i do
Caressing your hair,saying babe I love you
this day was so long,my god how you were missed




It can't be his eyes,because I know
that theres someone else on his mind
It can't be his heart,you're not there
because you're somewhere deep in mine
It can't be love,it's so impossable
because you were meant for me
everynight you lay beside him in bed
you close your eyes,I'm all you see




Don't let another night,end without a kiss
I don't want this moment to be destroyed by him
Tell me when you look in his eyes,you feel a love like this
this will be the fight of my life,and if I never win
Still remains is this heartbeat,and every breath for you
and my desires to convince you that I'm so in love with you
I know I sound ridiculous,but maybe I'm not wrong
who else can fall to tears,every moment that you are gone




BluLuvly's photo
Tue 03/25/08 06:33 AM
I like the poem

MirrorMirror's photo
Tue 03/25/08 06:42 AM
flowerforyou

lurchs_sister's photo
Tue 03/25/08 07:23 AM
Night... don't hang on too long or she is going to make you crazy.

Nice write!flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 03/25/08 07:30 AM
J.T Awesome write my friend.bigsmile

nightruler's photo
Tue 03/25/08 07:32 AM
Thank you everybody/I really enjoyed writng this..and I'm so glad I'm not in a situation like this,because I'd probably lose all my teeth..lol

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 03/25/08 07:34 AM
ohhh for sure no doubt in my mind lol But ohhh how you can place us right there with your words bigsmile

lurchs_sister's photo
Tue 03/25/08 07:38 AM

Thank you everybody/I really enjoyed writng this..and I'm so glad I'm not in a situation like this,because I'd probably lose all my teeth..lol


You had me worried JT!! I could so feel the emotion in it. I'm glad you're not there!flowerforyou

nightruler's photo
Tue 03/25/08 07:44 AM
I'll try to write something real next time..however I'm sure other men..including myself have been in this situation

lurchs_sister's photo
Tue 03/25/08 08:05 AM
JT, write what is in your heart... This is beautiful! I was just concerned about you is all as I think you are a wonderful person.flowerforyou

nightruler's photo
Tue 03/25/08 08:06 AM

JT, write what is in your heart... This is beautiful! I was just concerned about you is all as I think you are a wonderful person.flowerforyou



I appreciate you,believe me

2Btrue2One's photo
Tue 03/25/08 08:11 AM

I'll try to write something real next time..however I'm sure other men..including myself have been in this situation


There was a time that I went through some very terrible pain because of something like this, but now that I look back on it and God giving me the strength along with very few friends that stood by me, I realized it was best it was over..

Thank you for the poem JT, it brought back memories of a time in my life when what seemed like defeat, turned out to be an amazing victory in the end...
drinker

lurchs_sister's photo
Tue 03/25/08 08:20 AM


JT, write what is in your heart... This is beautiful! I was just concerned about you is all as I think you are a wonderful person.flowerforyou



I appreciate you,believe me


blushing blushing blushing aawwwwww Thanks JT!flowerforyou flowerforyou

nightruler's photo
Tue 03/25/08 08:37 AM


I'll try to write something real next time..however I'm sure other men..including myself have been in this situation


There was a time that I went through some very terrible pain because of something like this, but now that I look back on it and God giving me the strength along with very few friends that stood by me, I realized it was best it was over..

Thank you for the poem JT, it brought back memories of a time in my life when what seemed like defeat, turned out to be an amazing victory in the end...
drinker




Now there's a reason to love being a writer/This so reminds me of a show I played where people were in tears in the audience..it was quite an experience

2Btrue2One's photo
Tue 03/25/08 08:44 AM



I'll try to write something real next time..however I'm sure other men..including myself have been in this situation


There was a time that I went through some very terrible pain because of something like this, but now that I look back on it and God giving me the strength along with very few friends that stood by me, I realized it was best it was over..

Thank you for the poem JT, it brought back memories of a time in my life when what seemed like defeat, turned out to be an amazing victory in the end...
drinker




Now there's a reason to love being a writer/This so reminds me of a show I played where people were in tears in the audience..it was quite an experience


I agree with you, we do write poems that touch others in some sort of way, sometimes loving, sometimes sad, sometimes giving hope, sometimes if for no other reason, but just to bring a smile to their faces

nightruler's photo
Tue 03/25/08 08:46 AM




I'll try to write something real next time..however I'm sure other men..including myself have been in this situation


There was a time that I went through some very terrible pain because of something like this, but now that I look back on it and God giving me the strength along with very few friends that stood by me, I realized it was best it was over..

Thank you for the poem JT, it brought back memories of a time in my life when what seemed like defeat, turned out to be an amazing victory in the end...
drinker




Now there's a reason to love being a writer/This so reminds me of a show I played where people were in tears in the audience..it was quite an experience


I agree with you, we do write poems that touch others in some sort of way, sometimes loving, sometimes sad, sometimes giving hope, sometimes if for no other reason, but just to bring a smile to their faces




Amen to that Sir Daniel

2Btrue2One's photo
Tue 03/25/08 08:50 AM
And a salute to you my warrior brother for the things you write..drinker

lurchs_sister's photo
Tue 03/25/08 08:54 AM
to you both a curtsy and lowered headflowerforyou flowerforyou