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There ain't much that I can say
that hasn't been said before All I know that babe it's getting late and theres a need I can't ignore for some time now I've had this thought that could destroy everything we have and god knows if we get caught every breath for you may be my last I have seen you walk into my dreams everynight I've spent alone in thoughts of you I swear your touch was made for me from another voice you hear I love you It just cannot be,you made a mistake that I would never put you down for but I will remind you until my dying day that I still love you more It can't be his eyes,because I know that theres someone else on his mind It can't be his heart,you're not there because you're somewhere deep in mine It can't be love,it's so impossable because you were meant for me everynight you lay beside him in bed you close your eyes,i'm all you see I've been thinking as time passes me by will you someday feel these words that I write I wish for once you'd see things my way You tell me you love him,I don't buy it There are things you can't hide from me because you wouldnt be here in my arms tonight if that was something I could believe and he doesnt say the things I say to you he never tells you the words I swear are true I don't mean no harm,but you know better than this Does he fall to his knees the way i do Caressing your hair,saying babe I love you this day was so long,my god how you were missed It can't be his eyes,because I know that theres someone else on his mind It can't be his heart,you're not there because you're somewhere deep in mine It can't be love,it's so impossable because you were meant for me everynight you lay beside him in bed you close your eyes,I'm all you see Don't let another night,end without a kiss I don't want this moment to be destroyed by him Tell me when you look in his eyes,you feel a love like this this will be the fight of my life,and if I never win Still remains is this heartbeat,and every breath for you and my desires to convince you that I'm so in love with you I know I sound ridiculous,but maybe I'm not wrong who else can fall to tears,every moment that you are gone |
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I like the poem
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Night... don't hang on too long or she is going to make you crazy.
Nice write! |
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J.T Awesome write my friend.
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Thank you everybody/I really enjoyed writng this..and I'm so glad I'm not in a situation like this,because I'd probably lose all my teeth..lol
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ohhh for sure no doubt in my mind lol But ohhh how you can place us right there with your words
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Thank you everybody/I really enjoyed writng this..and I'm so glad I'm not in a situation like this,because I'd probably lose all my teeth..lol You had me worried JT!! I could so feel the emotion in it. I'm glad you're not there! |
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I'll try to write something real next time..however I'm sure other men..including myself have been in this situation
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JT, write what is in your heart... This is beautiful! I was just concerned about you is all as I think you are a wonderful person.
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JT, write what is in your heart... This is beautiful! I was just concerned about you is all as I think you are a wonderful person. I appreciate you,believe me |
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I'll try to write something real next time..however I'm sure other men..including myself have been in this situation There was a time that I went through some very terrible pain because of something like this, but now that I look back on it and God giving me the strength along with very few friends that stood by me, I realized it was best it was over.. Thank you for the poem JT, it brought back memories of a time in my life when what seemed like defeat, turned out to be an amazing victory in the end... |
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JT, write what is in your heart... This is beautiful! I was just concerned about you is all as I think you are a wonderful person. I appreciate you,believe me aawwwwww Thanks JT! |
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I'll try to write something real next time..however I'm sure other men..including myself have been in this situation There was a time that I went through some very terrible pain because of something like this, but now that I look back on it and God giving me the strength along with very few friends that stood by me, I realized it was best it was over.. Thank you for the poem JT, it brought back memories of a time in my life when what seemed like defeat, turned out to be an amazing victory in the end... Now there's a reason to love being a writer/This so reminds me of a show I played where people were in tears in the audience..it was quite an experience |
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I'll try to write something real next time..however I'm sure other men..including myself have been in this situation There was a time that I went through some very terrible pain because of something like this, but now that I look back on it and God giving me the strength along with very few friends that stood by me, I realized it was best it was over.. Thank you for the poem JT, it brought back memories of a time in my life when what seemed like defeat, turned out to be an amazing victory in the end... Now there's a reason to love being a writer/This so reminds me of a show I played where people were in tears in the audience..it was quite an experience I agree with you, we do write poems that touch others in some sort of way, sometimes loving, sometimes sad, sometimes giving hope, sometimes if for no other reason, but just to bring a smile to their faces |
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I'll try to write something real next time..however I'm sure other men..including myself have been in this situation There was a time that I went through some very terrible pain because of something like this, but now that I look back on it and God giving me the strength along with very few friends that stood by me, I realized it was best it was over.. Thank you for the poem JT, it brought back memories of a time in my life when what seemed like defeat, turned out to be an amazing victory in the end... Now there's a reason to love being a writer/This so reminds me of a show I played where people were in tears in the audience..it was quite an experience I agree with you, we do write poems that touch others in some sort of way, sometimes loving, sometimes sad, sometimes giving hope, sometimes if for no other reason, but just to bring a smile to their faces Amen to that Sir Daniel |
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And a salute to you my warrior brother for the things you write..
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to you both a curtsy and lowered head
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