Topic: A gentle hello | |
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I walk by only to see you, the light from the room burning so bright,
not of the blub, but of the inner light from a place beneath the skin, deep into the abyss know as the broken heart, only to be touched, by the softyly spoken words of a kind and gentle hello. |
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Well written. Thank you.
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Very nice,,,,,
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Very sweet
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Heeeyyy, you stole that from me! :P jk
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that is very inspiring
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I looked beaneath the oceans for you and i,and up into the sky and i
made a wish that one day a place upon the ground could be found for you and ibecause in the dark a place we will embark a child crys |
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for you andi for the wish has been foundfor you and i
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Havent ggot it aall straight yet so what do you think
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loraine not all bad, pleasant.
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