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Topic: Whispering Words...
michael1313's photo
Mon 01/08/07 05:08 PM
Whispering Words within my mind,
silent words for my Dreams to find,
only found on sleepless nights,
only around in dreaming flights,
passions kiss and lovers rights,
only found in lonely Knights,

as my Ghost Ship fills her sails,
soft dream breeze,not malestroms gails,
Quietly glides through my dream tales,
Lone Wolf cries in hopeful wails,

flying on tides of loving breeze,
trying for love,as my dreams heart sees,
bound by a dream,not only to tease,
reaching out to lonely,only to please,
Given all from my lonely heart,
Gliding on for my only start,

Whispering Words from my Ghost Ships,
lingering on her soft sweet lips,
living for her loving bliss,
longing for her loving kiss,
hidden within the dreams we miss,
given within her sweetest kiss,

Whispering Words of my sunset,
dreaming true for my loves bet,
tho' none have truely found me yet,
living within their own sunset,

Dreamers know I've tried my best,
Poets know I've carressed her Breast,
Lovers know I've passed this test,
Lonely still,just like the rest,

Whispering Words within my head,
Lonely words to forever dread,
dreaming in my Lone warm bed,
without true Love,we're better off Dead,
but whispering words still haunt my head,
someday too,my Lonely Soul will be fed..........Lonely Soul


karmafury's photo
Mon 01/08/07 05:10 PM
Nice work Mike.

Dreamweaverangel's photo
Mon 01/08/07 05:12 PM
Michael, I must tell you, that is a heart-felt poem! I pray you find
love and real peace, in your life, someday, soon!

michael1313's photo
Mon 01/08/07 05:13 PM
this is what happened when I listened to those lil voices...

Thanx Karma,
what happened to your poems?
saw them both,english and french,commented ,,,and as I posted it,they
turned into just th french version...???

michael1313's photo
Mon 01/08/07 05:14 PM
thanx "D"...so do I...

karmafury's photo
Mon 01/08/07 05:15 PM
Right behind yours Mike. The pages got messed so I had them deleted and
reposted.

michael1313's photo
Mon 01/08/07 05:17 PM
oh,ok...I'll go re read and post a comment...oooops...lol...

oklady53's photo
Mon 01/08/07 05:34 PM
Michael, that is an excellent poem. Thanks for posting it. Anna

michael1313's photo
Mon 01/08/07 05:43 PM
thanx OKLADY...I see you are new here,

Welcome to Justsayhi.com

hopes you find a special one for you,
and have fun here for a long time......M.

Cybear's photo
Mon 01/08/07 06:09 PM
I've been waiting patiently at my bear cave's entrance scouring the
landscape listening through the howling winds for the next tale of the
lonely soul.Then the bear lifts his head up wards toward the sky
sniffing at the moonlight he begins to hear whispering words cutting
through the darkness.These beautiful words transform into hope.Then I am
flooded with contentment because I know deep within my heart that I will
find my soul mate also.Just as you will also.I am deeply grateful for
your poems Michael and this hope that your words generate provides
solace and perseverance.You are a very gifted poet Michael.I wish for
you the same blessings that DWA had mentioned.Godspeed!Cybear.

Gryphyn's photo
Mon 01/08/07 06:16 PM
Very Good, The sails of time will help you find the beauty you seek.

:)

G

michael1313's photo
Mon 01/08/07 06:19 PM
many thanx for reading y'all...and understanding...M.

sandylou2456's photo
Mon 01/08/07 06:27 PM
Very beauatiful and meaningful words in that peem Michael Great Job

liliuminterspinas's photo
Mon 01/08/07 06:27 PM
just wandering around the site and I found your poem :) read it and
liked it. nice work indeed

sandylou2456's photo
Mon 01/08/07 06:27 PM

poem even...lol

no photo
Mon 01/08/07 06:36 PM
Michael, obviously u know i am new here, but since i have come on...it
is always nice to read ur poems. Great words from a true tallent.
Gives me courage to continue writing....I love all of ur poems so far
and i am sure to continue enjoying.

michael1313's photo
Mon 01/08/07 07:03 PM
Thank You All for reading my words... :)

Peachymon...I have enjoied your poems too...M.

michael1313's photo
Mon 01/08/07 07:04 PM
oooops typo...Peachimon...sorry...lol...only human...lol...

terisa's photo
Mon 01/08/07 07:38 PM
oh michael...i loved that poem and i to am praying u find your
soul...life is to short to be alone...looking forward to more of your
beautiful poems

michael1313's photo
Mon 01/08/07 08:57 PM
thank You Terisa

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