Topic: Sadness of goodbye part 2/Her words
nightruler's photo
Sat 03/22/08 03:55 PM
You had such a way with words
nearly fooled me into loving you
Swore you'd take away the hurt
that life could put me through
but all I felt was such anger
I never knew until I found you
Your fortune in lies,lead to goodbye
I can't back from you

Forgiveness can't heal these wounds
All I need is time to forget
I want the haunting memories to fade
so this heart can now repent
Never will your tears convince me
heaven is beyond anything you gave
You say you're broken down on your knees
but I can't be your slave



As I lay here in my bed
thoughts of you just storm in my mind
I loved you so much,I wish you were dead
if only to bring me to life
I don't want the image of you to linger
they can see it in my eyes
cause I'm the one they never remember
its always the one I've left behind



Breathe for once on your own
not for the sake of me,not for love
for these things I just can't give to you
no matter how you come undone
Beautiful words are just my weakness
the man behind them had me so torn
I heard you say baby please dont do this
but I dont love you anymore





bad_girl's photo
Sat 03/22/08 04:03 PM
:cry:

pkh's photo
Sat 03/22/08 04:11 PM
flowerforyou really nice write,time and forgiveness in my thoughts does heal in time

2Btrue2One's photo
Sat 03/22/08 04:30 PM
Edited by 2Btrue2One on Sat 03/22/08 04:31 PM
Daniel comes in
slames his fist upon the groung
causing great up heavels
all around

Stop doing this my friend
your broken heart will surly mend
I will walk with you
until the very end

A Knight at your service Sir
Daniel...

lurchs_sister's photo
Sat 03/22/08 04:36 PM
Nice write... don't hang on too long to what was...flowerforyou flowerforyou

nightruler's photo
Sat 03/22/08 04:39 PM
Hey i dont mean to lead anyone on..but these are just fictional stories..I'm actually happy,and alas...not always the character in my writing...but as always....thanks for looking out for me

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 03/23/08 04:12 AM
flowerforyou drinker flowerforyou

Gryphyn's photo
Sun 03/23/08 06:00 AM
I want a copy of the book, with characters like this it might just be worth reading.

laugh bigsmile

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