Topic: My first love poem | |
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Title:Can not find her...
Writer:Me Prince ;) "Be gentle with me first one I am posting" Through the rageing desert I must go, To find my angel that don't want a game or show, To travel so deep, To travel so far, It's a battle I fought to get this far, I have been to hell,Not once but more then twice, She was not down there,Neither was water or ice, I went to heaven to try and find her, I have looked and searched everywhere, But still Can not find her, Might find another to carry the fire, Our passion went cold, what do i do, So now I'm looking for an Angel, That might be you. Tell me what you all think(i hope all is spelled right ) |
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Its good!
Welcome to the poetry/creative writting section! |
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THAT WAS REALLY BEAUTIFUL I HOPE YOU SHARE SOME MORE OF YOUR TALLENT WELL THANKS FOR SHARING THAT NICE POEM
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that was beautiful sweetie keep up the good work
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Nice
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Thank you everyone i am glad you enjoyed it.
I got more poems but they are drifferant,But i will post them.If you would like. Prince:) |
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