Topic: My first love poem
princecharming213's photo
Wed 03/19/08 05:32 PM
Title:Can not find her...
Writer:Me Prince ;)
"Be gentle with me first one I am posting"


Through the rageing desert I must go,
To find my angel that don't want a game or show,
To travel so deep, To travel so far,
It's a battle I fought to get this far,
I have been to hell,Not once but more then twice,
She was not down there,Neither was water or ice,
I went to heaven to try and find her,
I have looked and searched everywhere,
But still Can not find her,
Might find another to carry the fire,
Our passion went cold,
what do i do,
So now I'm looking for an Angel,
That might be you.



Tell me what you all think(i hope all is spelled right
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MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 03/19/08 05:34 PM
Its good! drinker flowerforyou
Welcome to the poetry/creative writting section!

no photo
Wed 03/19/08 05:35 PM
THAT WAS REALLY BEAUTIFUL I HOPE YOU SHARE SOME MORE OF YOUR TALLENT WELL THANKS FOR SHARING THAT NICE POEM

sasfire75's photo
Wed 03/19/08 05:36 PM
that was beautiful sweetie keep up the good work:heart: flowerforyou

Shaden's photo
Wed 03/19/08 05:38 PM
Nice flowerforyou

princecharming213's photo
Wed 03/19/08 05:59 PM
Thank you everyone i am glad you enjoyed it.
I got more poems but they are drifferant,But i will post them.If you would like.

Prince:)