Topic: Drivel
FroznChild's photo
Wed 03/19/08 01:34 AM
Sometime you just have to write some drivel...
Get it out of the way, so you can write some good stuff.
Lol... all you poets know what I mean.


I said a ha ha ha, a hee hee hee,
a ha ha hee ha ha...
Bet you can't, say that twice, without twisting your jaw...

I said, a hee hee hee, a hoo hoo hoo,
a ha ha, hee, hoo hoo...
If you knew what I was laughing about,
why you'de laugh this much too.

I was walking down the road one day,
when what did I think I saw...
a woman running down the street,
with her shirt inside her bra...

I pointed out, as she approached,
and said,
is that a double d?
She looked down at her lacy breast,
and then she kicked me in the knee...

And I said...
ah ah ah a, ooh ooh ooh ooh,
ah ah, eeh eeh eeh ah,
Bet you can't, say that twice,
without twisting your jaw... without

I said, eeh eeh eeh a, ooh ooh ooh a
ah ah a, eeh, ooh ooh,
If you knew what I was laughing about,
why you'de laugh this much too.

ow ow ow, agh, ow ow ow, ugh,
ooch ooch ooch ooch ooch...
If I saw that girl again,
I'd kick her in the cooch...

I said, a hee hee hee, a hoo hoo hoo,
a ha ha, hee, hoo hoo...
If you knew what I was laughing about,
why you'de laugh this much too.

God forgive me,
With Equescent thoughts...
FroznChild indifferent

no photo
Wed 03/19/08 01:50 AM
laugh sorry dude, but that was lame and hard to find a groove in.grumble

FroznChild's photo
Wed 03/19/08 04:01 AM
Lol... yep... lame... I agree...
Total drivel...
what was this guy thinking?

LAMom's photo
Wed 03/19/08 08:25 AM

Lol... yep... lame... I agree...
Total drivel...
what was this guy thinking?


Me thinks your such a silly boy,,,

flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Wed 03/19/08 08:39 AM
flowerforyou for your thoughts

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 03/19/08 12:21 PM
laugh laughable drivel!

jimz's photo
Wed 03/19/08 06:20 PM
Dude, everything I read from you, has it's own imaginative, original world. When you publish that book, I hope you give me thanks, peace

jimmy

7Kate7's photo
Wed 03/19/08 07:01 PM
Yeah, it was drivel. But man, even your drivel has its own interesting spark. Plus, it takes guts to post anything anywhere and special guts to post drivel.

Differentkindofwench's photo
Wed 03/19/08 07:03 PM

laugh sorry dude, but that was lame and hard to find a groove in.grumble

Hard to find a groove in? Um, okay, I'm apologizing right off the bat, but beyond perhaps spelling it, do you have any idea what rhythm is?

FroznChild's photo
Thu 03/20/08 11:42 PM
Wow... who could have expected these kind of responses, from this kind of post!
Thanks everybody! way to rock the status bar!
course, it always makes me feel good.
been just a little bit busy recently... but plan to be responding more, soon.