Topic: Here Comes Me
FroznChild's photo
Wed 03/19/08 01:09 AM
Here Comes Me

I'm writing high for the last time tonight ... maybe for a long long time.
Although I must admit, that every hit, has helped my meter and rhyme.
They've given me words that come from the ether ... words that mean something deep.
And at oft times, when the poetry was over, the drugs have helped me to sleep.
Helped me to keep my mind straight ... though that saying seems somewhat ironic.
But when you smoke your smokes, and you smoke that weed, being sober requires a tonic!
I've said so many things when high, that I've sorta grown that frame of mind.
My life changed over to a different setting, and now that I'm sober, I seem to find,
Someone in me that's been caged in my head, just leaning back and watching the show.
Having a laugh and taking a break, letting personality go for the go.
But now, that different me knocks at the door, the one that's been waiting so long...
He wants the chance to be me for a while, and to hold him back has been sorta wrong.
He's just a little more responsible, just a little more refined and cool,
He takes the time to think twice, before playing for the crowd, a fool.
He's learned a lot from me that way. My many mistakes and my quick to give smile.
He comes to the board with a lot more game, and he's bringing a lot of my style.
I think as we walk down that hallway ... as I step to the shadows, and he, to the light.
That we'll smile at one another, say, "Hey brother, I'll give it, you gave it, one hell of a fight."

With Equescent thoughts...
FroznChild indifferent

no photo
Wed 03/19/08 01:12 AM

Here Comes Me

I'm writing high for the last time tonight ... maybe for a long long time.
Although I must admit, that every hit, has helped my meter and rhyme.
They've given me words that come from the ether ... words that mean something deep.
And at oft times, when the poetry was over, the drugs have helped me to sleep.
Helped me to keep my mind straight ... though that saying seems somewhat ironic.
But when you smoke your smokes, and you smoke that weed, being sober requires a tonic!
I've said so many things when high, that I've sorta grown that frame of mind.
My life changed over to a different setting, and now that I'm sober, I seem to find,
Someone in me that's been caged in my head, just leaning back and watching the show.
Having a laugh and taking a break, letting personality go for the go.
But now, that different me knocks at the door, the one that's been waiting so long...
He wants the chance to be me for a while, and to hold him back has been sorta wrong.
He's just a little more responsible, just a little more refined and cool,
He takes the time to think twice, before playing for the crowd, a fool.
He's learned a lot from me that way. My many mistakes and my quick to give smile.
He comes to the board with a lot more game, and he's bringing a lot of my style.
I think as we walk down that hallway ... as I step to the shadows, and he, to the light.
That we'll smile at one another, say, "Hey brother, I'll give it, you gave it, one hell of a fight."

With Equescent thoughts...
FroznChild indifferent
smoke some more and i'll get back to youlaugh

LAMom's photo
Wed 03/19/08 08:50 AM

Here Comes Me

I'm writing high for the last time tonight ... maybe for a long long time.
Although I must admit, that every hit, has helped my meter and rhyme.
They've given me words that come from the ether ... words that mean something deep.
And at oft times, when the poetry was over, the drugs have helped me to sleep.
Helped me to keep my mind straight ... though that saying seems somewhat ironic.
But when you smoke your smokes, and you smoke that weed, being sober requires a tonic!
I've said so many things when high, that I've sorta grown that frame of mind.
My life changed over to a different setting, and now that I'm sober, I seem to find,
Someone in me that's been caged in my head, just leaning back and watching the show.
Having a laugh and taking a break, letting personality go for the go.
But now, that different me knocks at the door, the one that's been waiting so long...
He wants the chance to be me for a while, and to hold him back has been sorta wrong.
He's just a little more responsible, just a little more refined and cool,
He takes the time to think twice, before playing for the crowd, a fool.
He's learned a lot from me that way. My many mistakes and my quick to give smile.
He comes to the board with a lot more game, and he's bringing a lot of my style.
I think as we walk down that hallway ... as I step to the shadows, and he, to the light.
That we'll smile at one another, say, "Hey brother, I'll give it, you gave it, one hell of a fight."

With Equescent thoughts...
FroznChild indifferent


"Hey brother, I'll give it, you gave it, one hell of a fight."

<<<< this Mom is standing up with that look on her face,,, Kinda goes like this:::::: ((( Visual here ))))

Eyes shed tears for a child re-born,,, Faith in him restored
his shell,,,Hope sets in,, Reality you see,,, A fool my dear
not to me,,,, Words felt deep,, Words brought tears,, to this Mom today,,, Some worst fears,,, I Stand with grace and dignity
My child of Life,,, Mmmmmmmmm now you see,, Within your shell lives deep a child,, within your Soul a man was born....

flowerforyou

lurchs_sister's photo
Wed 03/19/08 09:36 AM
You are a brother in this fight and I am there for you. Welcome to the other side.flowerforyou flowerforyou

I'm proud of you!:heart:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 03/19/08 12:36 PM
:heart: (((Frozen)))

me2g's photo
Wed 03/19/08 12:37 PM
i feel it...smokin

FroznChild's photo
Thu 03/20/08 02:05 AM
Lol... Thank you everybody.
Smiles for everyone!
I am rather touched by the comments...
Especially yours Miss LaMom...
so good to see you, hope your day is going swell!

pkh's photo
Thu 03/20/08 06:37 AM
flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou