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flattery will get you everywhere so nice be be with someone who cares unfortunatly i think my rhymer is broken so ill leave you with this little token you seem to be one of lifes greatest treasures and caring for you comes in no lil measures my breath stills for anticipation of your revelations for tonight you have made me feel blessed talking to you makes my heart arrest i hope to rhyme again with you soon when thinking of me just look at the moon  
and swoon... and swoon, and swoon. |
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sweetness treats
sweetness eats my heart out without a pout! |
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you gonna be on tomorrow?
if not, my greatest sorrow for to sleep i am headed alone and unbeded but look forewardto you so this is your cue to make me impressed with all youll confess |
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Frozen and Audrey sitting in a tree
being quick and so sass C just having fun then what comes along the jester laughing and singing his song 
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slowhand youre a sh*t
but ill certainly sit through your verbal sparring though im not really barring you your laughter well see what comes after my sleep laden mind in my pillow ill find |
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The problem with me and Audrey is wild...
is that her frigidness, that turned me into froznchild... I just don't know what to do, to warm her up, cept slide below her waist, and sup, and sup, and sup... |
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fridgid! oh my
that ill deny i am very warm blooded my bed just flooded! that poem was evil and nasty and cruel (you know which one!) but with it youve made me your fool |
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Audrey and Frozen still sittin in the tree
R H Y M I N G first comes poems then comes dreams someday find out if all is as it seems 
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Single white male,
looking for a potential bride it says intimate encounter, cause I like to test drive the ride I am quite picky, dont wanna sound rude but if you are a midget 6 foot 1 aint right for you cuz we would look like freaks, walking down a crowded street and I'd laugh at your lisence cause I'd see your little feet and laughter turns to tears when its you i'm picking on you would pack your little bag and your little ass would be gone but this doesnt mean I'll break every heart I want a girl who's chill,and one who doesnt fart you can be human,just have a little class I dont want a big mac girl with a case of thunder ass is he picking on the fat,this nerdy little chump actually i think its cute when a girls a little plump nothing makes me sick than a body like a stick like you're smoking something lethal,and your skinny ass looks sick I do prefer brown hair,eyes it doesnt matter but they cant be stoned,like glass about to shatter cause drugs aint for me,I've seen it all before with hands in my wallet,and a friend named Equador but now were on the subject of race,color creed if you can touch my heart,then you're the girl I need It would never be a problem if our cultures collide cause you would still be a hottie with a nerdy guy At last I will say,bored wives need not apply cause i'm always getting dumped for the former guy and all the whines of how he'd drink and be ungodly mean but now's he's out of jail,I guess he has been redeemed And it's hard to have compassion,its not in my soul for a girl who likes to slave,and likes to be controlled I'd never ask for once for you to bring a beer or tell you to cook me dinner as i slap you on the rear I'm not the alpha male,I'm more passionate and reserved Dont know what women want,but i know what they deserve so if you like to have fun,and my thoughts you defend click on my profile,then click add to friends. |
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Single white male, looking for a potential bride it says intimate encounter, cause I like to test drive the ride I am quite picky, dont wanna sound rude but if you are a midget 6 foot 1 aint right for you cuz we would look like freaks, walking down a crowded street and I'd laugh at your lisence cause I'd see your little feet and laughter turns to tears when its you i'm picking on you would pack your little bag and your little ass would be gone but this doesnt mean I'll break every heart I want a girl who's chill,and one who doesnt fart you can be human,just have a little class I dont want a big mac girl with a case of thunder ass is he picking on the fat,this nerdy little chump actually i think its cute when a girls a little plump nothing makes me sick than a body like a stick like you're smoking something lethal,and your skinny ass looks sick I do prefer brown hair,eyes it doesnt matter but they cant be stoned,like glass about to shatter cause drugs aint for me,I've seen it all before with hands in my wallet,and a friend named Equador but now were on the subject of race,color creed if you can touch my heart,then you're the girl I need It would never be a problem if our cultures collide cause you would still be a hottie with a nerdy guy At last I will say,bored wives need not apply cause i'm always getting dumped for the former guy and all the whines of how he'd drink and be ungodly mean but now's he's out of jail,I guess he has been redeemed And it's hard to have compassion,its not in my soul for a girl who likes to slave,and likes to be controlled I'd never ask for once for you to bring a beer or tell you to cook me dinner as i slap you on the rear I'm not the alpha male,I'm more passionate and reserved Dont know what women want,but i know what they deserve so if you like to have fun,and my thoughts you defend click on my profile,then click add to friends. Whoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Bravo 
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Me thinks I have missed this post,, Must go ponder me some thoughts 
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Hey BonnyMiss, how you doing sis? it's so good to see you drop bye... to bad I must say, that you went on your way, you were here for just a blink of an eye... Somewhere in this rhyme, I have to find, a way to compliment you... on the words that you write... how they shine in the night... The wonderful poetry that you do... I really am blessed, to see you here, and your words on these pages, in my mind they do sear, for I never forget the rhymes of a friend, and my thankfullness for it, never will end. It's people like you, that when you drop by, the words left behind, make my heart sigh... Thank you again, for stopping on in, Please come back in awhile, and do it again! My Frozn child, you're such a gent Grateful we are that you were sent To brighten up these pages with your words You bring good cheer, what a reward I'm doing fine, thank you for asking I would rather be here than hard grafting But work I must to get by Don't want the bailiffs to make me cry!!!! I've seen your work on "Gotpoetry" Of course you would not recognize me But watched your progress I have done I'm in disguise,oh what fun! So, see if you can tell which one I am Then I will happily say "You're the man!!!
Keep entertaining us with prose and hiku's Your poetry has many faces as you've proved I'll pop in later when time allows So for now here's some
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I'm guessing now that it's my turn
I feel your eyes and they do burn I know you're watching from afar Come on over hop in your car I pain and worry all the day long Can it be right or will it be wrong I consider you all dear sweet friends I'll stick by your side till the very end |
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Single white male, looking for a potential bride it says intimate encounter, cause I like to test drive the ride I am quite picky, dont wanna sound rude but if you are a midget 6 foot 1 aint right for you cuz we would look like freaks, walking down a crowded street and I'd laugh at your lisence cause I'd see your little feet and laughter turns to tears when its you i'm picking on you would pack your little bag and your little ass would be gone but this doesnt mean I'll break every heart I want a girl who's chill,and one who doesnt fart you can be human,just have a little class I dont want a big mac girl with a case of thunder ass is he picking on the fat,this nerdy little chump actually i think its cute when a girls a little plump nothing makes me sick than a body like a stick like you're smoking something lethal,and your skinny ass looks sick I do prefer brown hair,eyes it doesnt matter but they cant be stoned,like glass about to shatter cause drugs aint for me,I've seen it all before with hands in my wallet,and a friend named Equador but now were on the subject of race,color creed if you can touch my heart,then you're the girl I need It would never be a problem if our cultures collide cause you would still be a hottie with a nerdy guy At last I will say,bored wives need not apply cause i'm always getting dumped for the former guy and all the whines of how he'd drink and be ungodly mean but now's he's out of jail,I guess he has been redeemed And it's hard to have compassion,its not in my soul for a girl who likes to slave,and likes to be controlled I'd never ask for once for you to bring a beer or tell you to cook me dinner as i slap you on the rear I'm not the alpha male,I'm more passionate and reserved Dont know what women want,but i know what they deserve so if you like to have fun,and my thoughts you defend click on my profile,then click add to friends. oh single white male with brunettes in his head midgets ar fun and whats wrong with red?
how bout a girl whos sassy and fun who keepsyou up nights and ready to run who likes cooking dinner and rear tapping too but i guess not.. ill never do i dont have the a$$ of thunder but youll always wonder how healthy i look with head in a book guess im nerdy too. such is life, but youre too far to go out and meet at the bar so how bout some blather or maybe youd rather pop in and say hows the weather |
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I'm guessing now that it's my turn I feel your eyes and they do burn I know you're watching from afar Come on over hop in your car I pain and worry all the day long Can it be right or will it be wrong I consider you all dear sweet friends I'll stick by your side till the very end |
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well hello miss sister
that theres a twister so happy you posted your voice my only advice you need someone nice and be left with many a choice |
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Edited by
Michelle_1982
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Wed 03/19/08 10:40 PM
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hello to all and all hello
now i am a bit shallow today i talked to kid's dad for now i am sad it seemed only yesterday that we went astray but it has been a many month but i know that he is junk |
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i read in here some fighting
i also read some love but you can't have love without the fighting so fight for the love |
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hello one and all thought i'd come back to call
upon a few who had assembled michelle sends her love bonny-mom-audrey above and frozen-nightruler-lurchs_sister my thoughts once again turn inward and then vanish upon lightweighted banter like a swift footed steed her profile caught me she can take my thoughts in rush quickly can't her! |
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in the dark with everyone watching i flow with the liquid musical fire enjoying the show of humanity catching each others eyes with longing desire vivid emotions in every frustration a whispered innuendo sometimes ending in verbal castration a rocking crescendo lips twitching a smile bewitching loving the glance, and another chance to dance and dance and dance |
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My Frozn child, you're such a gent
Grateful we are that you were sent To brighten up these pages with your words You bring good cheer, what a reward I'm doing fine, thank you for asking I would rather be here than hard grafting But work I must to get by Don't want the bailiffs to make me cry!!!! I've seen your work on "Gotpoetry" Of course you would not recognize me But watched your progress I have done I'm in disguise,oh what fun! So, see if you can tell which one I am Then I will happily say "You're the man!!!
Keep entertaining us with prose and hiku's Your poetry has many faces as you've proved I'll pop in later when time allows So for now here's some
Here I am taking, a risk I think, and your opinion of me, if I'm wrong, might sink... of course, there are a couple of people you could be, on this other sight that you call, got poetry! I must admit, that I am terribly afraid, that if I get it wrong, someone might get paid... to off me... The problem I have you quickly now see... And since you said that you were in disquise, Any facts I can gather, are no worthy prize... Maybe your profile on one or the other, is just a ruse, to confuse a brother... ok, I don't know... I might as well guess, pull a name from the many, I don't know who you are, I confess... So, here it is... I'm giving it a whirl... and I'm guessing, that your name, is Graphite Girl... |
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