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Topic: Lyrical Response Post
Michelle_1982's photo
Thu 03/20/08 05:44 AM
Edited by Michelle_1982 on Thu 03/20/08 05:46 AM
i soon realized
that i had to retained
that he wasn't worth a dime
and he wasn't worth my time

FroznChild's photo
Thu 03/20/08 05:47 AM
To my mail, to my mail, what you send there does swell...
a part of me, that no one does see...
I could play that romantic part,
and say it's my heart...
but it's a little bit more then that I'm afraid...
you do swell my rhyming, and thicken my timing,
as each time, two words, together, get laid.
I can only imagine, what you might announce,
what "hot heated conversations" you could so easily flounce,
and I know that it seems like it's gotta be hell,
when you have to send the riskyess, to someone's email...

But, we all know that I won't mince a word,
and no matter what someone wants to type right here,
they're bound to get heard...
some of the things that I have read here as of late...
It's all poetry... produces love, laughter, and hate...
So no matter what anyone thinks might be wrong...
no matter what the words, we're bound to get along.

I myself, no matter to who, could say some blushing things...
When poetry abounds from the lips, who knows what it might sing!

FroznChild's photo
Thu 03/20/08 05:51 AM

i soon realized
that i had to retained
that he wasn't worth a dime
and he wasn't worth my time

Michelle, what is it, that makes your heart sore?
That might make you think about something else a bit more?
What is it at night, that you secretly think of?
that would help you, for your situation, to quickly rise above?
I know that it's hard to forget and it lingers,
and the times that you were hurt, you couldn't count on your fingers,
but it never does anyone any good to dwell...
trying to figure out things that have no answer is hell...
With your little one's helping, it seems you have been strong,
and don't second guess yourself, for you know you aren't wrong.
He may be the one that you think that you want,
but maybe it's time that your dreams...
he can no longer haunt...
Maybe it's time that you let it all flowed...
and told that memory, to hit the road!

audreyjt's photo
Thu 03/20/08 05:55 AM

i soon realized
that i had to retained
that he wasn't worth a dime
and he wasn't worth my time


now no more mumbling
about lifes grumbling
i want to hear love and laughter
since its so soon after
he crapped on your heart
and smiling is the hard part

but thats why were here
to dry your last tear
as in frozn's prose
im gonna nibble your toes
until you start giggling
and maybe some wiggling
and laughing out loud
like a woman so proud!

Michelle_1982's photo
Thu 03/20/08 05:56 AM
i have told those memories
to hit the road
but some subjects brings up bad memories
i try so hard not to be so cold

Michelle_1982's photo
Thu 03/20/08 06:03 AM
it would take more than nibbling
to get me a giggling
for it don't work the same
my feet are more tame

FroznChild's photo
Thu 03/20/08 06:06 AM
Then we'll have to tie you down,
send away for a clown...
have him tickle your feet,
with exotic moss peet...
with extinct feathers from do'do's..
to tickle those toes!

audreyjt's photo
Thu 03/20/08 06:09 AM

it would take more than nibbling
to get me a giggling
for it don't work the same
my feet are more tame

wonderfully spoken!
and so quick on the draw
so here is your token
bad memories should be taken in claw
ripped to shreds
thrown under the bed
only taken out
when you need to pout
or kick or cry or scream
but remember ice cream
to make you feel good
when yo ufinally could

Michelle_1982's photo
Thu 03/20/08 06:09 AM
don't mess with my feet
they don't like to stay still
someone might get kicked with the feet
and feel rather ill

FroznChild's photo
Thu 03/20/08 06:10 AM
Well I am sorry to say,
but here comes the bright light of day...
and that's when I no longer,
seem to feel any stronger...
My eyes start to droop,
and then roll in a loop...
So it's that time again to stop for the "night"
everyone I have seen... such a beautiful sight...
things can only be could,
when surrounded by mates,
and these bunch of them,
were sent by the fates...
I hope that you all have a wonderful morn,
and if you want to keep posting, well don't feel torn,
go ahead and keep typing whatever you wish,
Just remember this is a two part,
double baked, rhyming dish.
If you want to leave a response,
please follow the format...
it has to rhyme,
right off the bat...
and then through the middle, unto the end...
When you're finished with your rhyming,
go ahead and hit send!
Goodnight everyone...
please, continue to have fun!
Post whatever rhymes you like...
Go ahead... get it done!

audreyjt's photo
Thu 03/20/08 06:13 AM
to get at your feet
without being kicked
a little mesquite
and my dogs will get licked!

Michelle_1982's photo
Thu 03/20/08 06:14 AM
good night there brother
and good day to you too
this little mother
will see you again soon

audreyjt's photo
Thu 03/20/08 06:17 AM
ahhhh... i think i scared him off
when i offered to doff
my pajamas
a sweet panoramadevil

just kidding, not that kinda girl
really as innocent as a shiny white pearl
huh

Michelle_1982's photo
Thu 03/20/08 06:21 AM
i think that i am going to follow
i think i am being called to the pillow
a couple of hours is what i might get
it will be worth it, i bet

audreyjt's photo
Thu 03/20/08 06:23 AM
alone all again... ah well
guess ill go elsewhere for a spell

goodnightto all and to all a goodnight
sleep well after turning off the light

lurchs_sister's photo
Thu 03/20/08 07:58 AM

well hello miss sister
that theres a twister
so happy you posted your voice
my only advice
you need someone nice
and be left with many a choice


my dear audrey such a peach
starting to think he is out of my reach
to find some one nice is what you said
wondering if that kind of man is alive or dead
sorry so blue and a bit depressed
in need of a dark hole cold and recessed

iraceslowcars's photo
Thu 03/20/08 08:04 AM
Edited by iraceslowcars on Thu 03/20/08 08:04 AM
You can search the lands and oceans blue
To find the one who can be true
But put that search upon the shelf
And take the time to know yourself
Don't despair when things look black
Things have a way of coming back
Stand up and brush off all of the dust
You'll find the one to love and trust

s1owhand's photo
Thu 03/20/08 10:34 AM
mild like first sunshine that hits the peak
wild like the stream over rocks just beneath
subtle as Aszu and Martel XO
hinting of flavors that are just so

like the stories of Kipling explain leopard spots
and elephants trunks and camel harumphs
the perfect companion for any occasion
in flip-flops or nothing or black tie even

though this get-together is no formal affair
nothing wrong to dress nicely
and do it with flair
you never know who will walk down this street
put a becoming foot forward
good style can't be beat

FroznChild's photo
Fri 03/21/08 04:29 PM
Ah another day, another day, that lyrical rhyme does come my way...
and I can't stop and hesitate, that is to say,
another day, another day, another day.

Hey everybody, hows it going?
I see that allover, there is poetry flowing...
A post I did see that said rhyme a fruit....
a particular hard one, that has no rhyming root...

and responses poured in like a tropical rain,
so many poets on the pages did stain,
what they thought about that topic presented,
and on the forums their ideas represented.

Ah... oh yes, I could say there is nothing cooler,
then seeing poets on the pages, their own thoughts stir,
it's a delight to see what so many talented minds will write...
I can't wait to see, what else there might be, tonight...

This particular thread, is meant to all rhyme,
so if you post in here, please keep it in time,
But as for me, I am off on my way...
to respond to some other forum threads, today.

BonnyMiss's photo
Fri 03/21/08 04:51 PM
So this thread is still going
nice to see the words' still flowing
Fronz,no,I'm not Graphite girl
guess by now your head's in a whirl

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