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Runpenzo
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Tue 03/18/08 02:42 AM
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I must take Frozens lead,
I've got school and work, When I rise from my bed, To all of you I muat bid adieu, I have to say goodbye, Although I've not talked to most of you, I hope to converse some time, I'd love to get to know you all better, So drop me a line, Love and Peace all, I'd just like to stay, But my grades would fall, So with smiles and a wave, I walk slowly away, I just hope my place you all save, Goodnight to you peeps, I say with such pride, I just hope this thread keeps... |
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Audreyjt,what a co winky dink
you got the same name as me last 2 letters,i think I go by nightruler,never knew why by day I'm JT,just an ordinary guy My mothers a nun,somewhere in oklahoma My father is dead,a neverending coma but not to say,they were never worth me I was blessed to be the son of a diva and a whore from new jersey I credit my father,for all that he taught me it shows in my work,like sexology but if I'm so good,then why am i here I'm not claiming I'm god,for religion I fear I'm just here to have fun,and flirt what the heck here comes one now,thats a mighty fine neck |
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so pretty your words and your thoughts sotrue for my life youve noticed something few do but lifes love lost in the night its hard to believe in true knight thank god for ever present optomism and to hell with foul verbal jism so thank you for being my nights knight id keep you, but im sure that youd fight in the morning ill smile and remember your thought and youll forevermore wish you were caught It seems that in the morning, I just might rue, the decision of letting me get away from you? I agree to hell with foul verbal jism (great line) A nasty after effect of mouth circumcision... (great sign) Thank God, is something that I do every day, and, yes, I thank God, when you came my way... So pretty as well were your words and thoughts... Not like so many other, of those useless twa** (lol) Ok, well, usually, I'm not so foul mouthed, but here, I greet the poet, wether they're northered, or they're southed... And to rise to the challenge, at least tonight I found... a few, risque words, have been written and bound. Cannot thank you enough, for the kind words that you said, Just like you, in the morning, they'll stick in my head. And I hope that I see more from you, when I come back to this thread... Stick around, talk to everyone... break a little bread! |
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Audreyjt,what a co winky dink you got the same name as me last 2 letters,i think I go by nightruler,never knew why by day I'm JT,just an ordinary guy My mothers a nun,somewhere in oklahoma My father is dead,a neverending coma but not to say,they were never worth me I was blessed to be the son of a diva and a whore from new jersey I credit my father,for all that he taught me it shows in my work,like sexology but if I'm so good,then why am i here I'm not claiming I'm god,for religion I fear I'm just here to have fun,and flirt what the heck here comes one now,thats a mighty fine neck nightruler i hope not a flybynight man thanks for the flirt lets see how i can..... audrey by day and and respectably though but at night im kohl, seen as naked and thought to be bought for the son of a diva and a whore to boot youredefinatly lyrical and certainly cute!(so bad) |
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wow that was horribly written
for someone not smitten im thinking im tired and definatly wired for my writing is droll and dull this early morn im surprised that its been so well borne |
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can we write in poem,
or does it have to be a rhyme? i have seen so many poems, not in a rhyme. |
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The poetry was perfect,I'm really impressed
It's hard to look at your neck and not imagine your breast but I see why your picture leaves so much to guess for its the man who sees your heart will always be best I'm quite giddy by your comment,you said I was cute like this one time at bandcamp,i smelled something funny on my flute If i have made you laugh,then for now i'm satisfied click add to friends,and you wont be denied |
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Here my dear, we perfer the rhyme,
it's easy to do, just any old time, It's not all that hard, just search your head, If it doesn't rhyme, can you post it elsewhere instead? On here, I'm sorry, (you can do what you like) try to rhyme, even if it don't make sense... Bike... See, that didn't make sense, but it made the line rhyme, and if you do that, in here, you will see in time, That words that you looked for but couldn't find before... start to rhyme, and make sense, even more and more, start to rhyme and make sense even more! |
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i also have a sad story
it didn't happen that long ago i thought that life was not that sorry we were together for eight years, or so |
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Goodnight one and all, I'm off to bed,
I need some rest, for this old sleepy head, I can already see that you are all having fun, and I leave it in your capable hands, to get the rhyming done... If anyone else should ask, please carefully tread, and give them the real essence, of how to work in this thread.. and whoever may catch your interest, wether tomorrow or tonight, Throw down some rhymes, and let your words fight... let them sleep together, after they've been printed on this page, for this, my friends, is our poetry stage... and here, what you write, will be in stone, for all to see, how wonderful rhyming poetry can be... You shouldn't have came if, if you didn't plan to get wild... you've stumbled on lyrical responses... (and, I GUESS ) the host, FroznChild... (however I remind, don't drop the ball, This post is made, to talk to anyone at all) |
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i also have a sad story it didn't happen that long ago i thought that life was not that sorry we were together for eight years, or so That's wonderful Michelle, (you know what I mean) Please put it here, for it to be seen... I can guarentee that it will be greatly admired, as long as to rhyming, we can see you aspired... I would love to hear it, and so would my friends... Pleae, tell us how this story begins... and ends... |
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i also have a sad story it didn't happen that long ago i thought that life was not that sorry we were together for eight years, or so I also wanted to say real quick, thanks for (keeping) making it rhyme... That was slick! |
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we met a long, long, time
never thought that our time would end it is hard to put it in rhyme but i know that my heart will mend |
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well friends we can be youll certainly see
that friendship for me comes best when free no hangups or preconcieved ideas from me and as to my breast seen not with my neck its certainly lovely and would definatly wreck the friendship you seek tis not for the meek this tounge may be silvery tarnished this face (or neck) heavenly varnished my words can be sad or thorney well lets just say that im certainly horney... hahah blahblahblah soforth and so on my night progresses in my prose im making such messes |
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we met a long, long, time never thought that our time would end it is hard to put it in rhyme but i know that my heart will mend i too am lost with a recent heartbreak tell me more for all of our sakes shared pain heals more quickly to keep it inside will just make you sickly |
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it started with a break up
then a friend showed us the way we ended up together a day before my birthday...cup i thought that he would stay we had our good times and our bad he told me that he would never leave me but found out he was bad he used to treat me real like no one should, you will agree decided to move in with each other thought what a way to go then i found his true color and we started fighting so he cheated on me so many times but i kept taking him back he kicked me out two times and always tried to get him back i found out that he has another child i told myself that will be the end of that now we don't talk...mild we have two kids from that |
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oh my dear,
i see your pain so sad and so clear get out of the rain im going through the same as you hes obviously a **** as mine was one too so find someone who isnt a hick |
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that is easier said than done
i am looking but don't seem to have any luck i dated this guy he told me to come he even had this big o truck he lasted but for a month but told me he wanted no more he told me he wasn't ready...stunk and not to call no more |
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so here i am
giving this a try waiting for that next man one that wont make me cry |
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i met someone not too long ago
he wanted to see me but he laid me down low when he didnt see that to treat a girl right you have to keep her in sight and not look to the east and the west looking for somone elses chest |
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