Not looking for ratings just suggestions to clean things up. I just want to generate more interest possibly.

Dude, Just think of something that you get attract to

Ohhh, you kids are something else!

What did I do that i'm something else? Is that an insult?

I'm andrew in college most important thing to me. I'm 19. I'm a nice guy I love video games music and sports. In busy a lot, but I'm looking for a girl to take away my spare time if you think you're her message me sometime I don't bite ;)

Try using complete sentences and don't be afraid of punctuation.

What is the most important thing to you? I don't understand your first sentence to begin with.

No.. but not necessarily a compliment either

Offer a cash reward...........

I fixed it. I never actually read it. i typed it on an ipod.

Well there's your first mistake! Why would you ask others to rate something you've never even read?

I did read it, but didn't check for errors. Sorry

Leave out "I concentrate a lot on my studies." It makes a person wonder if you have time to date.

Leave out "I live at home with my mom and grandpa and without them I would be lost." You sound like a little kid. Women don't want to date children.

Leave out " I have a part time job to help me pay my various bills and give me some spending money." You mention various bills .... it makes you sound like you are running up a lot of debts.

Leave out "I don't look for much in my possible girlfriend just for her to be respectful of me and trustworthy." You sound as if you are talking about a dog. Also, putting you don't look for much in a possible girlfriend makes you sound as if you'll take anything. No woman wants a guy who is willing to settle for anything. It is not flattering to her.

Last, how about posting another picture without the dog for your main photo? Not everyone likes dogs.

Good profile, good picture but you should add more pics of you...

I'm not looking for anymore opinions I like where I'm at now

I thought it was very well written... your improvements helped. The "lost" phrase I do agree with. There are many other ways you can express your love and admiration for your family without making it seem like your world revolves around them. It gives off the impression, right away.... that no other relationship could compare. Now I agree family holds a different sort of standard, but think about how a woman might read it.....

I took that out, but thanks for the input. I also took out the part about good grades I doubt anyone besides me cares about that plus it sounds cocky. I like where I'm at now.. it seems genuine and nothing is really bad anymore.

Okay... you were editing your post and your profile while I was posting, maybe?

I wish you lots of luck in your search, Andrew.

yea I did edit after you posted and thanks

Andrew.....


Your profile is wonderful and I like your new pic.

You don't need to put anything about your grades. The fact that you plan to go to Rutgers indicates you are a good student.

Good luck to you.

Thank you!

I think it sounds great and you have a cute smile. My guess is you'll have no problem attracting many.