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Topic: Little People
Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Mon 03/17/08 12:30 AM
Little People Up so high you wish to climb And dare to not look down, As little people scurry fast Below, upon the ground. Please don't dare to step on them You'll cause yourself to fall You'll never be a giant Because you're still so small. You think the air up there is better Don't rush to reach the top, Cause once you've made your way up there A stumble could lose it all. So sit and dream your wondrous dreams And strive to make them true. Don't forget there's little people That mimic what you do. Fadedspirit 3/16/2008

Enya Joined Mon 11/26/07 Posts: 2077	Mon 03/17/08 12:36 AM
that sounds like,what alotta people. they think thier big, but,thier little.

Dragonbite Joined Thu 03/13/08 Posts: 218	Mon 03/17/08 12:42 AM
Good write.

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Mon 03/17/08 12:42 AM
Thanks for reading Enya. Glad you dropped in, haven't seen ya in a while.

Enya Joined Mon 11/26/07 Posts: 2077	Mon 03/17/08 12:57 AM
I've been reading a book for an upcoming test we're having. so,I'm to tired to get on here.

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Mon 03/17/08 01:25 AM
Ahh, I see. Well good luck on your test.

shauna22 Joined Wed 01/16/08 Posts: 228	Mon 03/17/08 05:09 AM


MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 03/17/08 06:44 AM
(((Fade)))

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Mon 03/17/08 08:58 AM
Little People Up so high you wish to climb And dare to not look down, As little people scurry fast Below, upon the ground. Please don't dare to step on them You'll cause yourself to fall You'll never be a giant Because you're still so small. You think the air up there is better Don't rush to reach the top, Cause once you've made your way up there A stumble could lose it all. So sit and dream your wondrous dreams And strive to make them true. Don't forget there's little people That mimic what you do. Fadedspirit 3/16/2008 Don't forget there's little people That mimic what you do. So True,,,,

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Mon 03/17/08 09:02 AM
Nice write!

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 03/17/08 09:22 AM
very nice and so true

BonnyMiss Joined Thu 05/10/07 Posts: 15342	Mon 03/17/08 09:38 AM
Nice write Faded, on a different note............... Would this poem be in honor of the leprechauns,seeing that it is St Paddy's Day?

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Mon 03/17/08 09:49 AM
I thought that may be the case until I got to the mimic all you do part, leprechauns would NEVER - unless it was absolutely amusing

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Tue 03/18/08 08:35 PM
Thanks shauna... Thanks MsTeddyBear! Thanks LAMom. Thanks lurchs_sister. Aww, thanks pkh. Thanks BonnyMiss, I thought about it, but the leprechauns would make fun of me...lol It's about kids. :) lol dkw...that's true, but then again sometimes I'm amusing too...lol

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