Topic: Lonely boy/my brother
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Thu 01/04/07 06:36 AM
Since daddy left he's not the same
To him life is just a game
Mommy's out she's never home
Since age 13 he's been on his own
No one there to teach him
Wrong from right
And no one there
To tuck him in at night
Now he's in trouble oh so deep
Feels like he's climbing a hill
thats way too steep
He calls out to no one
In the darkest of nights
He's sunk so low
He's lost his will to fight
Threr's no where to turn
No where ro run
Cornered by fear
He turns to the gun.


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Thu 01/04/07 06:48 AM
THATS WAS GREAT IS IT A TRUE STORY IF IT IS IAM SOORY

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Thu 01/04/07 07:57 AM
yes to some extent it is a true story he didnt go to such extremes. he
had a rough childhood and i wrote that when i was 15 basically i was
hurting because he was.