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I’ve talked with you; I know you.
I see you deep as you go. What I could not see, You mentioned; another look, yes, it is so. Your words will roll around The recesses of my mind. And when we least expect it, Return with rhythm or rhyme. For this is how I process The deepness that I feel. See me as I truly am, Beneath the outer schpeel. |
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Lol... This was kick, and creative. Deep inner perspective, with a laughing flow...
Nice wording! |
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 thanks frozn!
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 (((Wench))) 
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Nice write with a hint of something deeper.
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I also wanted to, and forgot to say, that I loved the title that came with this one...
it was surely one of the best parts, on the play on words... lovely, differetkindawench... Lol... (Never Ending Story) To the Winch, Wench! |
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I’ve talked with you; I know you. I see you deep as you go. What I could not see, You mentioned; another look, yes, it is so. Your words will roll around The recesses of my mind. And when we least expect it, Return with rhythm or rhyme. For this is how I process The deepness that I feel. See me as I truly am, Beneath the outer schpeel. I love the process of you 
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Faded, nice catch! Then, again, I knew you would.
Frozn, it took me a while to catch your play on words or are you threatening to "jack me up" somehow? Eagle's got that covered! So nope, winching the Wench is well and thoroughly taken care of.... (((((((LA Mom))))))) Back at'cha, Babe!
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lol...thanks dkw. Ya know them whispers are rarely ever quiet.
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My Wench, My Wench, My Wench
You did good dawg! (In my other personaliteese: Extremely well written poem that has a great flow and flawless ending)  ~D |
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Nah... never trying to jack you up... lol.
I was sincere... Unshelled, was the tip of the iceburg, for this poem... the cherry, on top of the whip. cream. Very good write wench. lol. |
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Yeah, Yeah, Yeah, faded, I know, even my whispers are loud and unladylike; but I'm cute!!!!!! lmfao
Frozen, great reply! Howling with happiness (full body excited puppy wiggle), Sit. Your Wench Friend, let's not get rumors started, nip that ch'it in the bud real quick. To your other persona, I graciously accept and appreciate your kind words.....(schizo man) See Faded, I just can't maintain ladylike, I tol ya so! |
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nice
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lol dkw....I like the dragon persona anyway....more your style.
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