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I hear you call my name
through all the silence & pain never to remain in this despairing vein I hear you call my name through the darkness awakening my spirit yearns for you A piercing cry in the night sending creatures into flight tears like rushing waters flow I hear you call my name My broken heart answers please fill me with your love I am surrounded comforted in peaceful abandon I hear you call my name through all the silence & pain I humbly answer |
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please drain my vein...
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please drain my vein...  should i take this literally? if so you could be so lucky that was just rude  
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please drain my vein... should i take this literally? if so you could be so lucky that was just rude That doesn't rhyme 
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I'm willing to bet that Silverwaya wasn't too impressed/happy with those responses...
Lmao... Sorry Silver, Lovey poetry as usual... Don't let some instant response get you down... lol. |
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Excellent poem !
BTW,poems do not have to rhyme to convey their meanings. |
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Very nice silver, love the story..
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Btw, don't worry about what that one guy said.. you are very talented..
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I know who my real friends are on here. Thank you so much for all the heartfelt responses. Some people are jerks and don't appreciate good art. However, don't ever think that something like that will ever bring me down where my Father has put me or my friends. I know my worth. Thank you all again,
with much love and appreciation, C~
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Haha. Your poem is good. But you know what? When I read it and that guys responce; I actually thought it was a compliment. And who knows if it was or wasn't. Your poem made you sound vampiric (in a good way), so when he said that; I thought he was digging your poem. Hahaha. Like he was inviting you to drink his blood? But you hulk up all green and bite his head off (figurativley), lol. Maybe he is a jerk, I don't know.
Nice poem though. |
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Excellent poem ! BTW,poems do not have to rhyme to convey their meanings. OH,,,"GREAT" NOW ya tell me,lol,lol How ya been girl??? 
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I know who my real friends are on here. Thank you so much for all the heartfelt responses. Some people are jerks and don't appreciate good art. However, don't ever think that something like that will ever bring me down where my Father has put me or my friends. I know my worth. Thank you all again, with much love and appreciation, C~  CHEERS to THAT!!! Great thoughts of YOU....your work here...
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Haha. Your poem is good. But you know what? When I read it and that guys responce; I actually thought it was a compliment. And who knows if it was or wasn't. Your poem made you sound vampiric (in a good way), so when he said that; I thought he was digging your poem. Hahaha. Like he was inviting you to drink his blood? But you hulk up all green and bite his head off (figurativley), lol. Maybe he is a jerk, I don't know. Nice poem though. well , uh thank you....i think.lol however, vampirism was not even thought of as i was writing this. far from it. een if he was inviting me to drink blood or something that was still to me not a compliment. Sorry but i just didnt get that vibe from him. Anyway, glad that i have sparked so much "interest" here lol |
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I liked this one very much. Very heartfelt. Reminds me of how spirit's whispers can reach to any distance if one only listens.
Excellent write. 
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