Topic: While
Sharris's photo
Fri 03/14/08 10:16 PM
Kiss me while the sun does shine,
The dark comes soon enough.
The warm of day fills everywhere,
Let light dispell the rough.

Hold my hands while you can feel,
The soft and warm that through,
The cares of life have burdened.
Feel me, as I feel you.

See my eyes, as they are blue.
Get lost within their pools.
The depth of hold will fill you.
It changes as life rules.

Run to me and not away,
My arms and bossom yield,
For you I long to comfort,
And room and house, tend field.

Please, do not wait forever.
Today is that we're gifted.
Remember kisses waiting.
Remember longings lifted.

Raine Les 10/27/07

Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 03/14/08 10:40 PM
Very nice. Thanks for posting. :smile: flowerforyou

cnoteblack's photo
Fri 03/14/08 10:55 PM
letteth me poppith my forty ,let not thine eyes rest upon my shorty,respsct the player and be not yielding to the warnings of the game,for those become strong who were once lame,respond to confrontation,pockets pulled and released of what was full,whats yours has become mine,whats been gained is what is mine that remains.set out upon your journey with the joy of loss that you will know the triumph of survival...a robbery

BonnyMiss's photo
Sat 03/15/08 01:58 AM
Eloquently written,a beautiful read.

cnoterblack,why not post your's on a separate thread for everyone to see, it warrants being seen by all.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 03/15/08 03:47 AM
flowerforyou

Sharris's photo
Sat 03/15/08 08:53 AM
I agree, cnoterblack, you should post your work..deserving write..