Topic: Bitter Sweet
me2g's photo
Thu 03/13/08 02:51 PM
Twenty years have passed my eyes like minutes to an hour.
No longer child they call me man yet they strip my power.

A constant struggle deep within, no control or feelings.
A force inside, silenced cries, shorted of lifes dealings.

Confusion fills my once clear mind as building hate grows stronger.
Mind has left, without a trace... man I am no longer.

VirginVirgo's photo
Thu 03/13/08 02:54 PM
i know what u mean loldrinker drinker

no photo
Thu 03/13/08 02:58 PM

Twenty years have passed my eyes like minutes to an hour.
No longer child they call me man yet they strip my power.

A constant struggle deep within, no control or feelings.
A force inside, silenced cries, shorted of lifes dealings.

Confusion fills my once clear mind as building hate grows stronger.
Mind has left, without a trace... man I am no longer.
drinker drinker

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 03/13/08 03:04 PM
another good onebigsmile

FroznChild's photo
Thu 03/13/08 07:26 PM
A very excellent write indeed. Short, but deep... becareful where you step... you just might drown.