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FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Thu 03/13/08 12:45 AM
I cannot tell my soul anymore, that what I have done is right. I cannot convince myself in the darkness, that I'll be ok by the morning light. My heart so slowly tears asunder, underneath this constant pain... I cry so much when talking about it, that from these memories I refrain... But tonight... Tonight came to swiftly, for me to drown my woes, and as the memories come calling back, the deeper my fear grows. That, maybe I'll try to talk to her again... maybe try to make her see... how much she tears me apart inside, when she won't listen to me... My breath falls short of any real relief, as it quickens in its' pace, Worry lines crinkle across my brow, and tears stream down my face... It's time that I let you go again... tho tonight, I may not know how, I cannot keep my sanity, when you're here, like you are, with with me now. A memory... One that's more like an attack... One that won't listen, that won't speak, that won't take me back... And it'd be so much easier, if you would just let me, at least, be a memory. With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 03/13/08 07:58 AM
I cannot tell my soul anymore, that what I have done is right. I cannot convince myself in the darkness, that I'll be ok by the morning light. My heart so slowly tears asunder, underneath this constant pain... I cry so much when talking about it, that from these memories I refrain... But tonight... Tonight came to swiftly, for me to drown my woes, and as the memories come calling back, the deeper my fear grows. That, maybe I'll try to talk to her again... maybe try to make her see... how much she tears me apart inside, when she won't listen to me... My breath falls short of any real relief, as it quickens in its' pace, Worry lines crinkle across my brow, and tears stream down my face... It's time that I let you go again... tho tonight, I may not know how, I cannot keep my sanity, when you're here, like you are, with with me now. A memory... One that's more like an attack... One that won't listen, that won't speak, that won't take me back... And it'd be so much easier, if you would just let me, at least, be a memory. With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild Memories at times good or bad haunt our every core,, Release the past, live for the future,, live for you be happy,, time will ease the pain, yet the memory shall remain

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Thu 03/13/08 02:03 PM
Deep words LaMom... Lol... leave it to you to respond to this post! Love ya!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 03/13/08 09:42 PM
Deep words LaMom... Lol... leave it to you to respond to this post! Love ya! As I you

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Thu 03/13/08 11:33 PM
Deep words LaMom... Lol... leave it to you to respond to this post! Love ya! As I you

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Fri 03/14/08 04:40 PM


Unsane Joined Thu 11/29/07 Posts: 168	Fri 03/14/08 05:04 PM
wow. great write. thank you.

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Fri 03/14/08 08:22 PM
Hey, no problem... Glad that everyone enjoyed it!

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mteagle31 Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Sat 03/15/08 07:53 AM
My friend you do amaze me with your words... BRAVO........

brwnkimba Joined Tue 05/22/07 Posts: 1276	Sat 03/15/08 02:01 PM
I cannot tell my soul anymore, that what I have done is right. I cannot convince myself in the darkness, that I'll be ok by the morning light. My heart so slowly tears asunder, underneath this constant pain... I cry so much when talking about it, that from these memories I refrain... But tonight... Tonight came to swiftly, for me to drown my woes, and as the memories come calling back, the deeper my fear grows. That, maybe I'll try to talk to her again... maybe try to make her see... how much she tears me apart inside, when she won't listen to me... My breath falls short of any real relief, as it quickens in its' pace, Worry lines crinkle across my brow, and tears stream down my face... It's time that I let you go again... tho tonight, I may not know how, I cannot keep my sanity, when you're here, like you are, with with me now. A memory... One that's more like an attack... One that won't listen, that won't speak, that won't take me back... And it'd be so much easier, if you would just let me, at least, be a memory. With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild Fear is only a mask for curiosity to be shown when passionate about something alluring. Don't play with emotions of chaos, for despair is what you will be procuring. You FALL in love and STEP in lust, one is company to lies and the other comes with trust. Benign approaching what gift she brings, if only I new then how much I would miss the song she sings. What lesson could be more rigidly learned, play with loves fire and you will get burned.

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Sat 03/15/08 08:37 PM
Excellent brwn, Fall in love and step in lust... I like that. Vivid picture... and so true. Rock on, keep em coming!

justmenoel Joined Thu 08/02/07 Posts: 3137	Sat 03/15/08 08:45 PM
you are amazing...

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Sat 03/15/08 08:52 PM
you are amazing... ahh Noel... You are too sweet... Thank you.