I went for a walk
I was enjoying the summer breeze
smiling as I watched
the birds sing in the trees

Then in the corner of my eye
I saw an old man
he was just sitting there
with his head in both hands

Puzzeled by his demeanor
I approched and asked
are you ok sir
are you reflecting on your past

Slowly he looked up
he stared in my eyes
I was almost overwhelmed
it was like he was reading my mind

He opened his mouth
and he began to speak
I knew you would come
you are the one that I seek

He said
I am the last Knight
and with the edge of my sword
I have made wrongs right

As you walk your path
there will come a day
the voice of wisdom will speak
listen to her, she will help you find your way

Then he stood up
he looked so familiar
it was like seeing my reflection
when I look in a mirror

He told me things
that I would begin to see
but take heart and don't worry
because this is ment to be

By Daniel
03/09/08
Part one

The old man, Part two

I was awe struck by his story
and what he revealed to me
for this man seem to know
my entire history

He reached to his side
and unsheathed his sword
he said kneel down Daniel
for this is to be yours

The sword seemed to shimmer
it had a soft amber glow
I could sense that it's purity
was as white as snow

He turned the sword around
and placed it in my right hand
within an instant
in another place I did stand

As I held this sword
I felt the power it possessed
my heart began pounding
inside my chest

I looked around
for the old man that was there
but I couldn't find him
he wasn't anywhere

The air began to crackle
the sword seemed to come alive
my spirit began to float
up into the sky

I heard voices
mysteries were revealed
things I didn't know
were no longer concealed

In the next instant
I was back where I first stood
the old man had wrote his name
on a pieace of driftwood

He had traveled from the future
to me in the past
I finally understood
who he was a last

By Daniel
03/09/08
Part two
To be continued...

I hope all reading this will enjoy so far..

I enjoyed this and cannot wait for the next installment. Is this you meeting your future self ?

ahhh, well I can't let the cat out of the bag can I?.. hehe, thank you Bonny, your presence is always much appreciated...

lovely

Thank you linakat..
such a lovely lady you are too

Daniel your poems are wonderful and quite visual, you should be published, and you pocess powerful resources for writing a book...I loved this so much.

Claps long and hard for all the hard work and effort you've put into this fine masterpiece..

Thank you Noden, you are a sweetheart, and so special to me..

Daniel... This really rips me a new one, lol. Terrific... Taking a close look at this, and I'll let you know more thoughts...
But this captures the imagination... carries the feeling, and leaves one lingering for more...
Just a few thoughts on the posts.

I hope to make part three and four better than the first two..

Thanks Frozn..

Awww the visual that this portrayed was awesome very good

Thank you kristi, very nice comming from you..

Very nicely written, I could almost feel myself there with you.

Thank you Vicki, almost huh? hmm going to have to make the next two parts a little more capturing..

Wasn't you was me... I'm not feeling well so I'm a bit fuzzy in the brain today. You're writing is amazing as usual!

Glad to hear from you hope all is well.

I hope you get to feeling better, yes things are well with me..
thank you for asking..

That's what friends do... prayers for you daily as well. Would love to talk with you.