Sit here this eve
having a drink...
ok maybe more
Drinkin and thinkin
Thoughts now run away
Run away with me
Wildly spinning
Cannot see
Slow it down
Come around
See me
See inside of me
See the real me
Feel the real me
So completely
take the trip within
Look deep within
me.......
What is it that i see
What is it i think i may see
So deep inside of me
Woven webs..deep passages
Tageled about
I work it out
Slowly open my eyes
To what i find
A girl so lost
So lonely
If only....
She could see me
As i see her now
If only .....
She could wake within me
Bcome the real me
No longer afraid
No longer hiding

that hurts, the kid inside being trapped, being what the world made you, instead of true to yourself. it's painful akward and feels weird, but you can let her out, but when you do, let me know.

So you can explain I how I myself can set myself free

To drink and to think.
Not missing a blink, find that girl and give her a wink.
Open her mind to see her heart.
Its just a little part.
But the only way to trully start.

Great words Jenn...Keep um going girl!!!! :heart

Top of the line. I really liked this poem... It was deep, and it really helped me to feel the heart of the character...
If this is/was you... then you must have a real knack for looking inside yourself.
Thank you, sugarjen... for a beautiful read this morning.