Topic: Oh my love
2Btrue2One's photo
Sat 03/08/08 07:54 AM
Oh my love
mere words cannot describe
the essence and beauty
that you possess inside

When I lay down at night
and I begin to dream
I see visions of you
gliding on sunbeams

The beauty of your aura
shines so wonderfully bright
without a doubt
it's a guiding light

When you are near
I get weak in the knees
the sound of your voice
is like a soft summer breeze

How is it
that you have done this to me
because in my dreams
you're all that I see

With your soft flowing hair
with your soft lovely features
just leaves me breathless
to see one of heavens creatures

Oh my love
if I could but touch your angelic heart
help you realize
we shouldn't be apart

My love you would have
forever and eternally
but first you must believe
that I am truly worthy

I do know this
if you were mine
I would give you the world
over the course of time

You would never need to worry
for I would always be true
because with all my strength
I would always love you

By Daniel
03/08/08

To be continued
Part one

mischief_loki's photo
Sat 03/08/08 08:02 AM
With the happy est of :smile: :smile: :smile: . You invoke feelings of being truly love d. An inspiration to all!!!!!

pkh's photo
Sat 03/08/08 08:04 AM
beautiful I love that weak in the knees feeling,have only felt it twice in my life...look forward to part twoflowerforyou

AnnG1959's photo
Sat 03/08/08 08:05 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Daniel, and I can not wait for Part two.

I thank you for sharing flowerforyou

2Btrue2One's photo
Sat 03/08/08 08:07 AM

With the happy est of :smile: :smile: :smile: . You invoke feelings of being truly love d. An inspiration to all!!!!!


Thank you Loki, It's one of my goals to do just that, happy you liked it..drinker

no photo
Sat 03/08/08 08:07 AM
flowerforyou
You have a way of making my peepers well up and leak. :smile:
Very beautiful Daniel!

2Btrue2One's photo
Sat 03/08/08 08:10 AM
(((((pkh))))) (((((Ann))))) (((((Cindy)))))

everytime I get responses like that it really does touch me deeply.. thank you all for your wonderful replies..

Noden's photo
Sat 03/08/08 08:10 AM
Edited by Noden on Sat 03/08/08 08:11 AM
Whoo........hooooo

nice write for one

lucky woman,

Daniel.flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

Your heart is filled with such love
it's spilling out all over the place
someone better swoop you up fast, and
grab themselves some of it...omg!!

Still can't believe your singledevil

chop,chop on to Part11bigsmile

2Btrue2One's photo
Sat 03/08/08 08:14 AM
(((((Noden)))))
You are so special to me you know that, such a wonderful soul you have, I am blessed to have your friendship..

Noden's photo
Sat 03/08/08 08:16 AM

(((((Noden)))))
You are so special to me you know that, such a wonderful soul you have, I am blessed to have your friendship..


Awwh, baby the feeling is mutual...you know it!!
Thank you, Danielflowerforyou

Godschosengirl's photo
Sat 03/08/08 08:24 AM
beautiful, Daniel, just beautiful.smooched

sasfire75's photo
Sat 03/08/08 08:45 AM
OMG Danielson you finally did it sniff sniff you finally made me actually cry on this one.....it was beautiful sweetie pieflowerforyou sad

2Btrue2One's photo
Sat 03/08/08 09:05 AM

beautiful, Daniel, just beautiful.smooched


Thank you Godschosengirl, I consider it an honor that you have taken notice and posted your thoughts.. A true blessing it is comming from you..

2Btrue2One's photo
Sat 03/08/08 09:07 AM

OMG Danielson you finally did it sniff sniff you finally made me actually cry on this one.....it was beautiful sweetie pieflowerforyou sad


aww sas, I hope I have at least touched you in a good way, thank you..

sasfire75's photo
Sat 03/08/08 09:20 AM


OMG Danielson you finally did it sniff sniff you finally made me actually cry on this one.....it was beautiful sweetie pieflowerforyou sad


aww sas, I hope I have at least touched you in a good way, thank you..


lol always sweetie,now if I only can find a man just like you....meaning one that aint afraid to show his heart...

no photo
Sat 03/08/08 10:09 AM

Oh my love
mere words cannot describe
the essence and beauty
that you possess inside

When I lay down at night
and I begin to dream
I see visions of you
gliding on sunbeams

The beauty of your aura
shines so wonderfully bright
without a doubt
it's a guiding light

When you are near
I get weak in the knees
the sound of your voice
is like a soft summer breeze

How is it
that you have done this to me
because in my dreams
you're all that I see

With your soft flowing hair
with your soft lovely features
just leaves me breathless
to see one of heavens creatures

Oh my love
if I could but touch your angelic heart
help you realize
we shouldn't be apart

My love you would have
forever and eternally
but first you must believe
that I am truly worthy

I do know this
if you were mine
I would give you the world
over the course of time

You would never need to worry
for I would always be true
because with all my strength
I would always love you

By Daniel
03/08/08

To be continued
Part one


Lovely thoughts....have you ever considered free verse? I think you'd do well at it......

lurchs_sister's photo
Sat 03/08/08 10:10 AM
Edited by lurchs_sister on Sat 03/08/08 10:10 AM
Daniel you amaze me!flowerforyou

The tears of joy they do flow
You've rocked my world
Can't explain so you'll truely know

This tender side that I see
It reaches deep
To the very heart of me

Thank you Sir you've made my day
This for life I'll hold dear
Won't ever let go come what may


Letting those tear soften my soul one more time.flowerforyou

2Btrue2One's photo
Sat 03/08/08 10:18 AM


Oh my love
mere words cannot describe
the essence and beauty
that you possess inside

When I lay down at night
and I begin to dream
I see visions of you
gliding on sunbeams

The beauty of your aura
shines so wonderfully bright
without a doubt
it's a guiding light

When you are near
I get weak in the knees
the sound of your voice
is like a soft summer breeze

How is it
that you have done this to me
because in my dreams
you're all that I see

With your soft flowing hair
with your soft lovely features
just leaves me breathless
to see one of heavens creatures

Oh my love
if I could but touch your angelic heart
help you realize
we shouldn't be apart

My love you would have
forever and eternally
but first you must believe
that I am truly worthy

I do know this
if you were mine
I would give you the world
over the course of time

You would never need to worry
for I would always be true
because with all my strength
I would always love you

By Daniel
03/08/08

To be continued
Part one


Lovely thoughts....have you ever considered free verse? I think you'd do well at it......


Thank you, what is free verse?

2Btrue2One's photo
Sat 03/08/08 10:19 AM
Edited by 2Btrue2One on Sat 03/08/08 10:24 AM

Daniel you amaze me!flowerforyou

The tears of joy they do flow
You've rocked my world
Can't explain so you'll truely know

This tender side that I see
It reaches deep
To the very heart of me

Thank you Sir you've made my day
This for life I'll hold dear
Won't ever let go come what may


Letting those tear soften my soul one more time.flowerforyou


Vicki, I am glad I touched you in a special way..

lurchs_sister's photo
Sat 03/08/08 10:24 AM


Daniel you amaze me!flowerforyou

The tears of joy they do flow
You've rocked my world
Can't explain so you'll truely know

This tender side that I see
It reaches deep
To the very heart of me

Thank you Sir you've made my day
This for life I'll hold dear
Won't ever let go come what may


Letting those tear soften my soul one more time.flowerforyou


Vicki, I am glad I touch you in a special way..


The honor is mine! Wishing you all the happiness in the world!flowerforyou