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Oh my love
mere words cannot describe the essence and beauty that you possess inside When I lay down at night and I begin to dream I see visions of you gliding on sunbeams The beauty of your aura shines so wonderfully bright without a doubt it's a guiding light When you are near I get weak in the knees the sound of your voice is like a soft summer breeze How is it that you have done this to me because in my dreams you're all that I see With your soft flowing hair with your soft lovely features just leaves me breathless to see one of heavens creatures Oh my love if I could but touch your angelic heart help you realize we shouldn't be apart My love you would have forever and eternally but first you must believe that I am truly worthy I do know this if you were mine I would give you the world over the course of time You would never need to worry for I would always be true because with all my strength I would always love you By Daniel 03/08/08 To be continued Part one |
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With the est of . You invoke feelings of being truly d. An inspiration to all!!!!!
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beautiful I love that weak in the knees feeling,have only felt it twice in my life...look forward to part two
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Absolutely beautiful, Daniel, and I can not wait for Part two.
I thank you for sharing |
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With the est of . You invoke feelings of being truly d. An inspiration to all!!!!! Thank you Loki, It's one of my goals to do just that, happy you liked it.. |
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You have a way of making my peepers well up and leak. Very beautiful Daniel! |
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(((((pkh))))) (((((Ann))))) (((((Cindy)))))
everytime I get responses like that it really does touch me deeply.. thank you all for your wonderful replies.. |
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Edited by
Noden
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Sat 03/08/08 08:11 AM
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Whoo........hooooo
nice write for one lucky woman, Daniel. Your heart is filled with such love it's spilling out all over the place someone better swoop you up fast, and grab themselves some of it...omg!! Still can't believe your single chop,chop on to Part11 |
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(((((Noden)))))
You are so special to me you know that, such a wonderful soul you have, I am blessed to have your friendship.. |
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(((((Noden))))) You are so special to me you know that, such a wonderful soul you have, I am blessed to have your friendship.. Awwh, baby the feeling is mutual...you know it!! Thank you, Daniel |
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beautiful, Daniel, just beautiful.
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OMG Danielson you finally did it sniff sniff you finally made me actually cry on this one.....it was beautiful sweetie pie
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beautiful, Daniel, just beautiful. Thank you Godschosengirl, I consider it an honor that you have taken notice and posted your thoughts.. A true blessing it is comming from you.. |
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OMG Danielson you finally did it sniff sniff you finally made me actually cry on this one.....it was beautiful sweetie pie aww sas, I hope I have at least touched you in a good way, thank you.. |
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OMG Danielson you finally did it sniff sniff you finally made me actually cry on this one.....it was beautiful sweetie pie aww sas, I hope I have at least touched you in a good way, thank you.. |
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Oh my love mere words cannot describe the essence and beauty that you possess inside When I lay down at night and I begin to dream I see visions of you gliding on sunbeams The beauty of your aura shines so wonderfully bright without a doubt it's a guiding light When you are near I get weak in the knees the sound of your voice is like a soft summer breeze How is it that you have done this to me because in my dreams you're all that I see With your soft flowing hair with your soft lovely features just leaves me breathless to see one of heavens creatures Oh my love if I could but touch your angelic heart help you realize we shouldn't be apart My love you would have forever and eternally but first you must believe that I am truly worthy I do know this if you were mine I would give you the world over the course of time You would never need to worry for I would always be true because with all my strength I would always love you By Daniel 03/08/08 To be continued Part one Lovely thoughts....have you ever considered free verse? I think you'd do well at it...... |
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Edited by
lurchs_sister
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Sat 03/08/08 10:10 AM
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Daniel you amaze me!
The tears of joy they do flow You've rocked my world Can't explain so you'll truely know This tender side that I see It reaches deep To the very heart of me Thank you Sir you've made my day This for life I'll hold dear Won't ever let go come what may Letting those tear soften my soul one more time. |
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Oh my love mere words cannot describe the essence and beauty that you possess inside When I lay down at night and I begin to dream I see visions of you gliding on sunbeams The beauty of your aura shines so wonderfully bright without a doubt it's a guiding light When you are near I get weak in the knees the sound of your voice is like a soft summer breeze How is it that you have done this to me because in my dreams you're all that I see With your soft flowing hair with your soft lovely features just leaves me breathless to see one of heavens creatures Oh my love if I could but touch your angelic heart help you realize we shouldn't be apart My love you would have forever and eternally but first you must believe that I am truly worthy I do know this if you were mine I would give you the world over the course of time You would never need to worry for I would always be true because with all my strength I would always love you By Daniel 03/08/08 To be continued Part one Lovely thoughts....have you ever considered free verse? I think you'd do well at it...... Thank you, what is free verse? |
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Edited by
2Btrue2One
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Sat 03/08/08 10:24 AM
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Daniel you amaze me! The tears of joy they do flow You've rocked my world Can't explain so you'll truely know This tender side that I see It reaches deep To the very heart of me Thank you Sir you've made my day This for life I'll hold dear Won't ever let go come what may Letting those tear soften my soul one more time. Vicki, I am glad I touched you in a special way.. |
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Daniel you amaze me! The tears of joy they do flow You've rocked my world Can't explain so you'll truely know This tender side that I see It reaches deep To the very heart of me Thank you Sir you've made my day This for life I'll hold dear Won't ever let go come what may Letting those tear soften my soul one more time. Vicki, I am glad I touch you in a special way.. The honor is mine! Wishing you all the happiness in the world! |
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