Topic: The English Paper.
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Fri 03/07/08 09:43 AM
I remember a time when I was typing an English paper for school on the use of metaphors. I procrastinated and waited until the last minute to get it done.

One of the metaphors I meant to use was, "The pen is mightier than the sword." Well, I didn't proof read my paper before I turned it in, and I accidentally didn't leave a space between the "pen" and "is". Oooops!

When my paper was returned I got a big red circle around that word with one of these type of faces noway and a small comment on the side, "You did mean the (pen is), right? Proof read! Proof read!"

I got a B+ on it, though. :tongue:

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Fri 03/07/08 09:44 AM
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Fri 03/07/08 09:46 AM


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Fri 03/07/08 09:48 AM
So what did the teach look like? Was she hot?
(:-)

I remember a time when I was typing an English paper for school on the use of metaphors. I procrastinated and waited until the last minute to get it done.

One of the metaphors I meant to use was, "The pen is mightier than the sword." Well, I didn't proof read my paper before I turned it in, and I accidentally didn't leave a space between the "pen" and "is". Oooops!

When my paper was returned I got a big red circle around that word with one of these type of faces noway and a small comment on the side, "You did mean the (pen is), right? Proof read! Proof read!"

I got a B+ on it, though. :tongue:

MysterHK's photo
Fri 03/07/08 09:51 AM

So what did the teach look like? Was she hot?
(:-)

I remember a time when I was typing an English paper for school on the use of metaphors. I procrastinated and waited until the last minute to get it done.

One of the metaphors I meant to use was, "The pen is mightier than the sword." Well, I didn't proof read my paper before I turned it in, and I accidentally didn't leave a space between the "pen" and "is". Oooops!

When my paper was returned I got a big red circle around that word with one of these type of faces noway and a small comment on the side, "You did mean the (pen is), right? Proof read! Proof read!"

I got a B+ on it, though. :tongue:



It was a he, forever_fifties. But I could only just imagine the outcome if it was a female. happy

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Fri 03/07/08 09:52 AM
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Fri 03/07/08 01:06 PM
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