Topic: As I walk this path | |
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As I walk this path
in my journey through life I've seen unbelievable things with my own two eyes Sometimes the words that some people say leave you feeling so empty you accept that's just their way I'm sorry i'm not big I'm sorry i'm not small I'm sorry my hair isn't the right color at all I can't help who I am God made me this way I just go through my life I take it day by day But sometimes their words cut you so deep you hang your head down you begin to weep You look up to heaven and you say a soft prayer because you know he will listen you know that he cares At least I know in God's eyes I won't be rejected for God loves me for me I will always be accepted With these words I now part and I leave them with you i'm sorry you feel the way that you do By Daniel 03/06/08 |
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Thank you that was beautiful and true. I needed that!
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Your welcome, glad I could help
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Excellent Post Daniel... Way to start my morning off.
You stud you. |
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Glad I could be of service Frozn...
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It really was good... Been up a little while this morning. (Never went to sleep) and it's one of the best I've read all night. (lol, including other poetry sights, of course)
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Thank you, I do try my best to make them as good as I can..
You write pretty good yourself.. btw |
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Amazing as usual! Rings true and cuts to the core...
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Thank you Vicki, didn't mean to make you cry though *hugs*
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Tears are a good thing and help to soften the sould so no problem. Thank you for the hugs, sending them back.
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Your very welcome, don't mind giving my shoulder to lean on..
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If only that shoulder were closer!
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Daniel another great one.I too have seen enough,in my life and cried many tears.And to when I look up and pray that is what gets me through it all.Knowing no matter what I'll get through it with prayer and God.
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Daniel, I loved this poem it is so true. You are a very truly talented soul
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(((((Vicki))))) (((((pkh))))) (((((marina)))))
Thank you all for your wonderful replies.. |
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very beautiful...took me back to a time in my life that I forgot about....not good time but it also made me realize some good things that i had changed....ty
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