Topic: As I walk this path
2Btrue2One's photo
Thu 03/06/08 05:07 AM
As I walk this path
in my journey through life
I've seen unbelievable things
with my own two eyes

Sometimes the words
that some people say
leave you feeling so empty
you accept that's just their way

I'm sorry i'm not big
I'm sorry i'm not small
I'm sorry my hair
isn't the right color at all

I can't help who I am
God made me this way
I just go through my life
I take it day by day

But sometimes their words
cut you so deep
you hang your head down
you begin to weep

You look up to heaven
and you say a soft prayer
because you know he will listen
you know that he cares

At least I know in God's eyes
I won't be rejected
for God loves me for me
I will always be accepted

With these words I now part
and I leave them with you
i'm sorry you feel
the way that you do

By Daniel
03/06/08



no photo
Thu 03/06/08 05:09 AM
Thank you that was beautiful and true. I needed that!

2Btrue2One's photo
Thu 03/06/08 05:12 AM
Your welcome, glad I could helpflowerforyou

FroznChild's photo
Thu 03/06/08 05:13 AM
Excellent Post Daniel... Way to start my morning off.
You stud you.

2Btrue2One's photo
Thu 03/06/08 05:16 AM
Glad I could be of service Frozn...drinker

FroznChild's photo
Thu 03/06/08 05:27 AM
It really was good... Been up a little while this morning. (Never went to sleep) and it's one of the best I've read all night. (lol, including other poetry sights, of course)

2Btrue2One's photo
Thu 03/06/08 05:30 AM
Thank you, I do try my best to make them as good as I can..
You write pretty good yourself.. btw

lurchs_sister's photo
Thu 03/06/08 10:10 AM
Amazing as usual!:cry: :cry: :cry: Rings true and cuts to the core...

2Btrue2One's photo
Thu 03/06/08 10:35 AM
Thank you Vicki, didn't mean to make you cry though *hugs*

lurchs_sister's photo
Thu 03/06/08 10:36 AM
Tears are a good thing and help to soften the sould so no problem. Thank you for the hugs, sending them back.flowerforyou

2Btrue2One's photo
Thu 03/06/08 10:40 AM
Your very welcome, don't mind giving my shoulder to lean on..

lurchs_sister's photo
Thu 03/06/08 12:45 PM
If only that shoulder were closer!ohwell ohwell

pkh's photo
Fri 03/07/08 08:20 AM
flowerforyou Daniel another great one.I too have seen enough,in my life and cried many tears.And to when I look up and pray that is what gets me through it all.Knowing no matter what I'll get through it with prayer and God.

lizethmarina's photo
Fri 03/07/08 10:06 AM
Daniel, I loved this poem it is so true. You are a very truly talented soul flowerforyou

2Btrue2One's photo
Fri 03/07/08 07:26 PM
(((((Vicki))))) (((((pkh))))) (((((marina)))))
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Thank you all for your wonderful replies..

sasfire75's photo
Fri 03/07/08 09:10 PM
very beautiful...took me back to a time in my life that I forgot about....not good time but it also made me realize some good things that i had changed....ty