For the time i needed you the most
I thought for sure you'd somehow come through
but it's just another night,and her I'm waiting alone
feeling less than lonely,haunted by these thoughts of you
Tonight I'll dream of my own salvation
as your face lingers in my mind
And how your kiss was the last breath I'd take
but never could make you mine

You're my view to a neverending dream
my deperate fantasy
I have reached out to touch your face
but you can't touch a memory

I felt so cold tonight,just waiting for a change
Someone who would die before your eyes,
but tonight he's not the same
Waiting for the moment i cut my losses
and leave you vanished with the tide
trying hard not to love you as much as I do
before you consume every thought in my mind

BRAVO...Awesome JT..WILL

Thanks as always,my brother of metal

de nada

Night Ruler, ruled this poem. A very satisfying read. I really, enjoyed this one.!

Nice to see you again, it is always a joy to fall into your writing.


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Wow,, What an incredible afternoon,, Its been awhile since you graced us with your beauty,,, Awesome

thank u guys..this means alot to me

Nice one, I always enjoy reading poems that take a person into the mind of the writer.. and yours did that my friend.. very good indeed..

wow very nice

I like this....very much....

Bump! (I really did like this one)