Topic: The angel adores
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Thu 12/28/06 12:33 AM
Chained to a broken fantasy
I have descended from a dream
to stand before you helpless
in the realms of a memory
Covered in the requiem of silence
to no avail these words become
endless fragments of what could be
a love ascended from the sun
Moving on as the times shall pull me
Waiting for her to notice I'm alive
In her eyes a jewel placed so perfectly
but her visions were never mine
I ask through tears and triumph,ecstasy
and rage
if by an angels light my darkness shall drown
then let me rise above this day
to walk beside her and own the right
as no man has ever before
to capture just one moment in time
the fallen,the angel adores
If her wings of love shall ever embrace me
and I feel the warmth of her breath
If ever I'm given the chance to sleep beside her
then let me never awake again
for I would give all that I'm worth
just for her to look my way
and to hear her say at last I love you too
more than words can ever say

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Thu 12/28/06 03:00 AM
Beautiful JT..but she ain't gonna notice till ya say somethin to her...

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Thu 12/28/06 08:22 AM
Humm huhhhh that is very true!

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Thu 12/28/06 11:35 AM
She's a fictional character in my mind/there is no "her"

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Thu 12/28/06 01:56 PM
Hummm what can we say you draw us in with your poems with your words and
we get lost in time. Is it reality or not? We never know. Works of a
good poet!

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Thu 12/28/06 02:05 PM
good work JT...another good poem from a master!!!

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Thu 12/28/06 02:17 PM
Thank you very much