Topic: desperation(rewrite from 2 months ago)
ponchopollito's photo
Wed 03/05/08 01:13 AM
I sit silently.
Silently I watch.
Voratious claws eagerly strip the meat from my heart.
I do nothing.
I only watch,
as knashing teeth pulvirize the bowns of my soul.
In the end,
anger overwhelms me.
Hope looses meaning.
I lash out.
I lash out against the futility of it all.
lost in desperation.
I tear the the remaining stars from the fabric of my sky.

darkowl1's photo
Wed 03/05/08 01:16 AM
Edited by darkowl1 on Wed 03/05/08 01:17 AM
good, not a healthy way to live, but good.
cool grand canyon pic by the way

FroznChild's photo
Wed 03/05/08 05:08 AM
Hey poncho... I like the poem overall... very good.
The only question I have, is:
as knashing teeth pulvirize the bowns of my soul.
what are bowns?
lol...
Good to see you posting.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 03/05/08 08:36 AM
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