Topic: I didn't know
dhutch9's photo
Tue 03/04/08 05:34 PM
I didn't know
I could laugh
So hysterically

I didn't know
I could care
So intensely

I didn't know
I could love
So passionately

I didn't know
I could damage you
So deliberately

I didn't know
I could ache
So immensely

I didn't know
I could pray
So desperately

I didn't know
I could cry
So quietly

I didn't know
I could feel
Absolutely Nothing


Waltercool's photo
Tue 03/04/08 05:36 PM
did you know, now you know....

love life and all that is what i know.

pkh's photo
Tue 03/04/08 05:36 PM
nice write

dhutch9's photo
Tue 03/04/08 05:37 PM
Thanks pkh

Waltercool's photo
Tue 03/04/08 05:38 PM

did you know, now you know....

love life and all that is what i know.


good one and hope your going to be writing more!

wzrunner's photo
Tue 03/04/08 05:43 PM
Beautiful poem! I hope to see more from you sometime

Fadedspirit's photo
Tue 03/04/08 05:58 PM
Excellent write. :smile:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 03/04/08 06:12 PM
flowerforyou

FroznChild's photo
Tue 03/04/08 11:59 PM
Great write... keep em coming!