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Edited by
lizethmarina
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Tue 03/04/08 10:17 AM
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Finally, the early morning breeze dried up my tears
But as I was about to close the window to oblivion Your face came back to me Letting go slowly of this jaded chains I finally freed myself of your memories Facing the bright light of a new horizon, I smiled Our story unraveld from between my fingers Our inconclused story as many before us The last thread escaped from my hands and the last one of your memories said goodbye to me forever Forgetting everything, your kisses, your caresses, your words Nothing left of your love, that hurt me deeply so Finally left behind, hoping to not ever remember the pain Smiling, thinking to myself, it's all over now. Marina ![]() Finally free. ![]() |
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Hmm... a very good write... but, I think, at least in my case, wishful dreaming...
I could never forget my old loves... good, or bad. |
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Edited by
lizethmarina
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Tue 03/04/08 02:43 PM
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Thanks froznchild. is not so much about forgeting old loves 'cause no matter what they did to us we won't forget them. This one is more about feeling free, and that the memories of that person(s) no longer haunt one self and no longer hurt one self when thought upon them.
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Thanks froznchild. is not so much about forgeting old loves 'cause no matter what they did to us we won't forget them. This one is more about feeling free, and that the memories of that person(s) no longer haunt one self and no longer hurt one self when thought upon them. ![]() you captured it magnificently... |
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very good write
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yessss MsTeddy, free is the word of the day!
![]() pkh, thank you much ![]() frozn thank you. ![]() |
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