Topic: Oblivion
lizethmarina's photo
Tue 03/04/08 10:16 AM
Edited by lizethmarina on Tue 03/04/08 10:17 AM
Finally, the early morning breeze dried up my tears
But as I was about to close the window to oblivion
Your face came back to me

Letting go slowly of this jaded chains
I finally freed myself of your memories
Facing the bright light of a new horizon, I smiled

Our story unraveld from between my fingers
Our inconclused story as many before us
The last thread escaped from my hands
and the last one of your memories said goodbye to me forever

Forgetting everything, your kisses, your caresses, your words
Nothing left of your love, that hurt me deeply so
Finally left behind, hoping to not ever remember the pain
Smiling, thinking to myself, it's all over now.


Marina
:heart:


Finally free. :heart:

FroznChild's photo
Tue 03/04/08 11:58 AM
Hmm... a very good write... but, I think, at least in my case, wishful dreaming...
I could never forget my old loves... good, or bad.

lizethmarina's photo
Tue 03/04/08 02:43 PM
Edited by lizethmarina on Tue 03/04/08 02:43 PM
Thanks froznchild. is not so much about forgeting old loves 'cause no matter what they did to us we won't forget them. This one is more about feeling free, and that the memories of that person(s) no longer haunt one self and no longer hurt one self when thought upon them. flowerforyou

FroznChild's photo
Tue 03/04/08 03:32 PM

Thanks froznchild. is not so much about forgeting old loves 'cause no matter what they did to us we won't forget them. This one is more about feeling free, and that the memories of that person(s) no longer haunt one self and no longer hurt one self when thought upon them. flowerforyou

you captured it magnificently...

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 03/04/08 04:55 PM
drinker Free!!! drinker

pkh's photo
Tue 03/04/08 05:01 PM
very good write

lizethmarina's photo
Tue 03/04/08 06:19 PM
yessss MsTeddy, free is the word of the day! drinker

pkh, thank you much flowerforyou

frozn thank you. flowerforyou