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| Topic: §|tⁿ☻ Soft kisses in the rain | |
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Edited by
Sitngrin
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Mon 03/03/08 12:48 PM
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The rain slowly drizzles around us as we dance in each other’s arms
No need for words in this moment, your eyes are filled with charm We smile, laugh and twirl and I gently dip you down The rain gathers on your face and I pull you up and spin you round Lovingly, I wipe the rain from your face, not a single drop shall I miss We stare into each others eyes, with a flow of magic we begin to kiss Soaking wet from head to toe, we refuse to end our embrace You look so beautiful standing in front of me with such grace I hold you in my arms and whisper I love you in your ear You reciprocate your love, then laughing, we run to any shelter that is near © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author. |
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do we start or drop it? really nice poem by the way, there's a part of me that still wants a piece of you, but i want it to end. someone who can write like that, can't be all bad.
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do we start or drop it? really nice poem by the way, there's a part of me that still wants a piece of you, but i want it to end. someone who can write like that, can't be all bad. Nope, I had our previous disagreement erased, so in my mind it is erased as well. Thank you for the nice compliment 
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well, it friggin rocks man! i write a short story now and then, usually history based, go figure, but it's fun, and i get a lot out of it. my forte is f/x, but since i do it for a living, i don't do it for fun anymore.
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well, it friggin rocks man! i write a short story now and then, usually history based, go figure, but it's fun, and i get a lot out of it. my forte is f/x, but since i do it for a living, i don't do it for fun anymore. Congrats! Once I have enough compiled, it won't be just for fun (but I will still enjoy writing so it will always be fun for me) |
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are you doing a book format? or published spreads?
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are you doing a book format? or published spreads? Haven't really decided yet. Book format would make a nice compilation but published spreads would likely be more financially in my favor ~D |
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well let me know, you are very talented , and have a smooth writing prose. that's rare. good luck.
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well let me know, you are very talented , and have a smooth writing prose. that's rare. good luck. Thank you, I will email you when I figure it out. I appreciate you saying so. That's about the best thing a poet can hear.
~Den |
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it's also the hardest to stay in as well.
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Ummmmmmmmm dancing in the rain!
Good write!
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can we play in the puddles on the way? 
Very nice.... |
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Ummmmmmmmm dancing in the rain!
Good write!
Hey, don't forget about the kissing part, that's the most fun of the entire dance
 Thank you
~D |
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can we play in the puddles on the way?
Very nice.... Thank you, only if we jump in them and splash each other 
~D |
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That totally rocks dude that was beautiful not to mention soooooo much fun love you |
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That totally rocks dude that was beautiful not to mention soooooo much fun love you Dude, like thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. More fun when you close your eyes after you have read it and imagine it in your head!!! (((C))) ~Den |
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Back atcha (((LaMom)))
~Den |
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aww beautiful dance
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aww beautiful dance
Thank you, Pam, I appreciate
~Den |
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