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Topic: I am the lone warrior
2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Sun 03/02/08 05:58 PM
As I tell my story as I sing my song sometimes I wonder do I really belong I am the lone warrior With honor and valor I have fought your fight I have stood by your side with no end in sight I am the lone warrior I have stood strong in battle I have laid enemies low I could not surender or retreat for there was nowhere to go I am the lone warrior The battle was fierce and the enemies were fast but I will fight till the end even if I breath my last I am the lone warrior There were so many I didn't think I would make it the battle was taking it's toll from the wounds they did inflict I am the lone warrior As the battle raged on I dropped to one knee I asked the people I protected to please pray for me I am the lone warrior As I saw the fear in their faces and the tears in their eyes even with my wounds bleeding I knew I must rise I am the lone warrior Wave after wave they came and their weapons cut deep I prayed to the Lord for my soul to keep I am the lone warrior With no weapons to fight with no ammunition with my bear hands I will finish this mission I am the lone warrior The people I fought for I couldn't let die for with all my God given strength I made sure they'ed survive I am the lone warrior Part One By Daniel 03/02/08

lookingformrright8 Joined Sat 12/29/07 Posts: 537	Sun 03/02/08 06:00 PM
very nice I like this!!

laughsandgiggles Joined Sun 10/28/07 Posts: 3560	Sun 03/02/08 06:01 PM
wow! Awesome Daniel- can't wait for part 2

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Sun 03/02/08 06:01 PM


2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Sun 03/02/08 06:06 PM
Thank you all..

sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Sun 03/02/08 06:34 PM
that was a great poem sweetie its one that I can picture happening and catching at the heart seeing it....

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Sun 03/02/08 06:39 PM
thank you sas

toreybelle Joined Sun 10/28/07 Posts: 2132	Sun 03/02/08 07:19 PM
AND AGAIN..... great job!!! Will be looking for Part II.

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Sun 03/02/08 07:24 PM
Thank you Torey

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Sun 03/02/08 07:50 PM
That was great felt like I was almost there really looking forward to part two

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Sun 03/02/08 11:40 PM
almost the ultimate warrior... looking forward to part two as well... nice

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 03/03/08 05:42 AM
Thank you all, I may have part two ready sometime today before I go to work tonight, if not, maybe tomorrow morning when I get back..

Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Mon 03/03/08 08:03 AM
Wild horses, could not tear this man away from writing a part 11, and dam well lookin forward to it too... Once again, Sir Lancelot the gallant of your voice rises forcefully into a pose... Mid-morning to ya... Daniel

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 03/03/08 08:51 AM
Getting ready to post part two now Noden... Thank you

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Mon 03/03/08 09:19 AM
In awe Daniel... what quiet power!

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 03/03/08 09:37 AM
Thank you, part one and two is posted now..

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