Topic: the garden sea
jimz's photo
Sun 03/02/08 03:24 PM
the warm sea your sea
in me
long awaited eyes
is that a smile
or a sweet rocking
chair
i can only hold
your dreams

long blankets of our bodies
our soul warming up
but I hold all of you

by the garden
your essence
kneeling at the fountain
where i too am drinking
we knew how thirsty we were
but now
the thirst gone
but we keep
drinking
love



peachiegirl28's photo
Sun 03/02/08 03:26 PM
very dreamy and fresh flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 03/02/08 03:29 PM
This one is sweet...

drinker :smile:

pkh's photo
Sun 03/02/08 03:32 PM
very nice and uplifting Jim

diamondgirlrocks's photo
Sun 03/02/08 03:34 PM
it's really nice to hear sweet poetry.