Topic: RETURN
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Tue 12/26/06 01:10 PM
I slipped
Fell into you
Burning with hope for the future
Erasing the past
Pieces falling
Overhead she screams silently
I don't miss her at all
My ears hurt
Don't you see that the light has
Darkend my eyes
Our breath becomes dustJoining the twisted reunion
Of more and more
We raise questions and
Put them to bed once again
Expecting them to sleep another night
Without US
I dance and you laugh
The past looms heavily
In my heart and soul
Will I make it to your palace
Ivory and tall against
Azure skies
Waiting for me to arrive
Late
Always late for your love
The vision of what will be
Taunting and haunting me along
The way
You see the brass ring now in hand
No longer moves me
Fear befriends my love
Hearkens to my self control
Begging me to turn this car around
Wheels humming atop the open road to her
She is waiting for me
Waiting for us to become
For us to become
ONE

Dreamweaverangel's photo
Tue 12/26/06 01:12 PM
WOW, WILL! That is soooo deep!

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Tue 12/26/06 01:15 PM
Thanks.. I appreciate you kind words..WILL

greeneyedlady42's photo
Tue 12/26/06 02:13 PM
Really great writing- Good to see you, its been awhile

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Wed 12/27/06 11:24 PM
Had to really read this one

Love it...

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Thu 12/28/06 01:07 AM
good work Will,,,a side of you rarely seen...M.

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Thu 12/28/06 09:29 AM
Awesome Will what a change love it.

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Thu 12/28/06 09:36 AM
Nice to see the positive side of you Will, and if you ever turn that car
around I will personally come and kick your ass!! LOL

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Thu 12/28/06 09:39 AM
Hummmm I will second that lmao.