death came knocking at my door
i would not let him in
but he just kept on knocking more
death is not my friend

i looked out through the peep hole
saw a shrouded figure there
a skeletal frame without a soul
an empty black-hole stare

what do you want i shouted out
death did not reply
why are you here,what's this about
death said" you know why"

i've come to take you far away
to a place you've never been before
it's time you go,you just cant stay
so open up the door

i've spent so many years in pain
my heart could take no more
i realized what he said was right
i opened up the door

he took my hand and led me to
a strange and wondrous sight
so in these words i leave to you
don't forget "Embrace The Light".....




writings from the tombs.....



i hope yall like this one..

Cool,

o.k that's it ..i'm on strike im not writing any more ... c'mon people give me some feed back even if you think it stinks i work my bony fingers trying to write this poetic jibberish at least you can tell me what you think if i dont get some feed back thats it no more writings from the tombs ..i'll go on strike i swear ...oh..you'll miss me ..j/k...NOT... ..thats it im done *****in'..just needed to vent..i'm o.k now...

wow that was amazing we can all learn something from that.

what part the poem or the b*tchin'...

promise???

Liked how you fight death then relizied that some things you just cant fight. Made me feel something, I only do that for artists.

Thanks

What do you think of the post Song-from Vouyer?

tell me where its at and i'll look at it ..cant find it..

http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/88287

They say thier is a beauty within death,, a moment when one's being is emptied of the past rambles of life,,Once again I have enjoyed the ponderings of your soul,,,

woodrow sorry it took so long to get back to you on this ..i liked it thank you...