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Topic: Embrace The Light
tombraider Joined Wed 09/12/07 Posts: 5042	Fri 02/29/08 08:43 PM
death came knocking at my door i would not let him in but he just kept on knocking more death is not my friend i looked out through the peep hole saw a shrouded figure there a skeletal frame without a soul an empty black-hole stare what do you want i shouted out death did not reply why are you here,what's this about death said" you know why" i've come to take you far away to a place you've never been before it's time you go,you just cant stay so open up the door i've spent so many years in pain my heart could take no more i realized what he said was right i opened up the door he took my hand and led me to a strange and wondrous sight so in these words i leave to you don't forget "Embrace The Light"..... writings from the tombs..... i hope yall like this one..

Woodrow Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 212	Fri 02/29/08 08:45 PM
Cool,

bgeorge Joined Fri 09/14/07 Posts: 7850	Fri 02/29/08 08:54 PM


tombraider Joined Wed 09/12/07 Posts: 5042	Fri 02/29/08 09:04 PM
o.k that's it ..i'm on strike im not writing any more ... c'mon people give me some feed back even if you think it stinks i work my bony fingers trying to write this poetic jibberish at least you can tell me what you think if i dont get some feed back thats it no more writings from the tombs ..i'll go on strike i swear ...oh..you'll miss me ..j/k...NOT... ..thats it im done *****in'..just needed to vent..i'm o.k now...

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Fri 02/29/08 09:22 PM
wow that was amazing we can all learn something from that.

tombraider Joined Wed 09/12/07 Posts: 5042	Fri 02/29/08 09:57 PM
what part the poem or the b*tchin'...

bgeorge Joined Fri 09/14/07 Posts: 7850	Fri 02/29/08 10:12 PM
o.k that's it ..i'm on strike im not writing any more ... c'mon people give me some feed back even if you think it stinks i work my bony fingers trying to write this poetic jibberish at least you can tell me what you think if i dont get some feed back thats it no more writings from the tombs ..i'll go on strike i swear ...oh..you'll miss me ..j/k...NOT... ..thats it im done *****in'..just needed to vent..i'm o.k now... promise???

Woodrow Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 212	Fri 02/29/08 10:15 PM
Liked how you fight death then relizied that some things you just cant fight. Made me feel something, I only do that for artists. Thanks

Woodrow Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 212	Fri 02/29/08 10:17 PM
What do you think of the post Song-from Vouyer?

tombraider Joined Wed 09/12/07 Posts: 5042	Fri 02/29/08 10:23 PM
tell me where its at and i'll look at it ..cant find it..

Woodrow Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 212	Fri 02/29/08 10:32 PM
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/88287

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 03/01/08 05:44 AM
death came knocking at my door i would not let him in but he just kept on knocking more death is not my friend i looked out through the peep hole saw a shrouded figure there a skeletal frame without a soul an empty black-hole stare what do you want i shouted out death did not reply why are you here,what's this about death said" you know why" i've come to take you far away to a place you've never been before it's time you go,you just cant stay so open up the door i've spent so many years in pain my heart could take no more i realized what he said was right i opened up the door he took my hand and led me to a strange and wondrous sight so in these words i leave to you don't forget "Embrace The Light"..... writings from the tombs..... i hope yall like this one.. They say thier is a beauty within death,, a moment when one's being is emptied of the past rambles of life,,Once again I have enjoyed the ponderings of your soul,,,

tombraider Joined Wed 09/12/07 Posts: 5042	Sat 03/01/08 09:31 AM
woodrow sorry it took so long to get back to you on this ..i liked it thank you...