Topic: oh unusual day
tb74's photo
Fri 02/29/08 12:29 PM
---
oh unusual day
for inside to stay
and out of doors
the snows fall hard
and oh unusual day
stranger that arrives
this party for
i have found respite
in warm cups delight
and soothe my view
and hearken to
this unusual day
i will not venture out
the snow falls throughout
the winter land
where cold ice stands
upon tree and fence
for another sip
accompanied by a bit
of tea time snack
while i unpack
oh unusual day
---

MirrorMirror's photo
Fri 02/29/08 12:30 PM
good job bro

pkh's photo
Fri 02/29/08 12:53 PM
very nice

lurchs_sister's photo
Sat 03/01/08 02:47 PM
you make my heart sing every time i read what you've written!

sealove42's photo
Sat 03/01/08 08:34 PM
nice job

TAB

FroznChild's photo
Sat 03/01/08 10:40 PM
I really like your "unusual", or unique, ryhming structure...
Beautiful picture...

FroznChild

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 03/02/08 12:19 PM
flowerforyou