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Topic: Cynicism
kc0003's photo
Fri 02/22/08 07:05 PM

with the eyes of an angel
she looks deep into my soul
imperfections expose themselves
and it scares the hell out of me

what does she see
why would she waste her time on me

i used to be so much better, I used to be whole
but, that was long ago
berfore this world took grasp of me and turnd me into the shell you see before you now

maybe I was naïve then…
or, perhaps it was because I simply had younger eyes

ah, the hope of youth
wasted on the ones that lack the wisdom to understand it

wisdom?

kind of a silly word
not something you gain no, I think it’s more tangible than that
it’s more like the bruises one is left with when you have the hope beat out of you

yeah, now that’s wisdom
so I lay lonely on my bed and wonder
should I call her
do I dare let her look through my eyes
no, let it go,
go to sleep
it most likely wouldn’t have worked anyway…


MirrorMirror's photo
Fri 02/22/08 07:07 PM
flowerforyou

fastlinnie's photo
Fri 02/22/08 07:08 PM
smokin smokin

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 02/22/08 07:15 PM
(((KC))) call her... flowerforyou

Good write by the way! All of us are broken in some aspect...

DanielleChristina's photo
Fri 02/22/08 07:16 PM
Smile darling, and beautiful writing. get some rest <3

kc0003's photo
Fri 02/22/08 07:19 PM
thanks mirror

kc0003's photo
Fri 02/22/08 07:22 PM
fastinnie

I apreciate your time thank you

kc0003's photo
Fri 02/22/08 07:23 PM

(((KC))) call her... flowerforyou

Good write by the way! All of us are broken in some aspect...


i would but it is just a write

something we all go through...i think...

flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Fri 02/22/08 07:24 PM

Smile darling, and beautiful writing. get some rest <3


i am

thank you for your kind words

flowerforyou

robertsonm30's photo
Fri 02/22/08 09:11 PM
very nice write and thank you for welcoming me to the site drinker

LAMom's photo
Sat 02/23/08 07:34 AM


with the eyes of an angel
she looks deep into my soul
imperfections expose themselves
and it scares the hell out of me

what does she see
why would she waste her time on me

i used to be so much better, I used to be whole
but, that was long ago
berfore this world took grasp of me and turnd me into the shell you see before you now

maybe I was naïve then…
or, perhaps it was because I simply had younger eyes

ah, the hope of youth
wasted on the ones that lack the wisdom to understand it

wisdom?

kind of a silly word
not something you gain no, I think it’s more tangible than that
it’s more like the bruises one is left with when you have the hope beat out of you

yeah, now that’s wisdom
so I lay lonely on my bed and wonder
should I call her
do I dare let her look through my eyes
no, let it go,
go to sleep
it most likely wouldn’t have worked anyway…




Imperfections,, Hmmmmmmmmm they are quite beautiful from my eyes,,

Wisdom,,, Yes ,,, Lives deep within you

Eyes,,, Awwwwwwwwww I see you thru my eyes,, WoW!!!! Incredible my friend..

When the time is right, you shall know,, and when she see's the you I see,,, Damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn I hope she knocks ya off your feet, to pick you up and look deep within your Soul,, and then she... see's the you I so Adore..

Beautiful.. simply beautiful flowerforyou :heart:

pkh's photo
Sat 02/23/08 07:46 AM
You are a beautiful soul Kcflowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Sat 02/23/08 10:00 AM
thanks mom
you are too kind
and i am lucky to have you as a friend


flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Sat 02/23/08 10:03 AM

You are a beautiful soul Kcflowerforyou


thamk you pk

nice of you to stop in and comment

flowerforyou


no photo
Sat 02/23/08 06:54 PM
maybe not this one but she will come
and live within your beautiful heart

stef

no photo
Sat 02/23/08 09:12 PM
after reading all of the other ones tonight this one makes more sense.

you have such a great soul


s

BonnyMiss's photo
Sun 02/24/08 09:11 AM

why would she waste her time on me


And why not? Each and every one of us has a value,those that do not see the value in us has not seen or appreciated the value in themselves. Very good write kc.

jimz's photo
Sun 02/24/08 09:31 AM
nicedrinker
peace
jimmy

kc0003's photo
Sun 02/24/08 10:14 AM


why would she waste her time on me


And why not? Each and every one of us has a value,those that do not see the value in us has not seen or appreciated the value in themselves. Very good write kc.


very nice to see you here
thank you for the comments

flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Sun 02/24/08 10:16 AM

nicedrinker
peace
jimmy


thank you jimz

drinker drinker

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