Topic: Cold Winter Day
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Wed 12/20/06 04:15 AM
Another cold grey day
The smell of winter in the air
Wishing for a little snow
Hoping it will make my words flow
His gentle laughter fills the air
Jokes tossed about this morning
Smiles filling our faces
He comes to me and hugs me without warning
A soft whisper
In case someone should hear
I love you Mom
Fills my ear
I whisper back
I love you too Bren
You are one of my saving graces
He blushes
And pushes away
Still smiling
On this cold winter day


** I sat here rying to write and it just wouldn't happen, I was growing
frustrated, I know the words are there but they just wouldn't flow,
until I got the hug and whispered words of love from my son this
morning.Its going to be ok now, I didn't lose the words :) **

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Wed 12/20/06 04:49 AM
That was really pretty poet.....ain't kids butyfull, wink wink.

catchme_ifucan's photo
Wed 12/20/06 05:06 AM
Gurl, they had just gone to that special safe place ...
No Worries!

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Wed 12/20/06 05:30 AM
Yes they are T :)

I'm glad they went to that special safe place Catch :)

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Wed 12/20/06 06:43 AM
good work C.C.P.,and you just keep those words safe and
let them flow when they will!!!

*without warning*

(((((((((((((HUGGS)))))))))))))!!!

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Wed 12/20/06 01:16 PM
Awww girl what a hug from our kids will restart
not only our hearts but our brains as well!

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Wed 12/20/06 01:20 PM
no you didn't all, those words are there from now on.

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Thu 12/21/06 01:36 AM
sounds so good.

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Thu 12/21/06 02:38 AM
Thank you everyone :)

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Thu 12/21/06 05:31 AM
Very nice read first thing in morning. Isn't it great what kids can
bring out.