Topic: Echo
lizethmarina's photo
Thu 02/21/08 12:55 PM
Edited by lizethmarina on Thu 02/21/08 12:56 PM
I wanted to scream, find an answer, a reason, a why things happen the way they do
Inside the tired empty memories
Inside the loneliness that fills my being
In the uncertainty of the change that is to come, on the feeble feelings that will no longer come to be.

I wanted to cry, find an answer, of where my broken heart would be
I couldn't find anything, only the cruel reality of disillusion and the emptiness that love leaves behind
Inside my hollowed soul where the broken pieces of me could be found
Reluctant to come out, tired of loving you, tired of crying for you

I screamed into the sunset that I loved you, just to see if you could hear me
I just heard my own voice screaming back a thousand times that I loved you
Crying inside the canyons of my soul, still asking why
Alone in the inmensity of everything, I got lost, and your love no longer found me

The walls rose up, and to your love, the entrance was denied
My loveless heart no longer belonging to you
But even then, if the echo calmed my tears, i would have stopped crying for you a long time ago.


Marina
F.M.L.H
brokenheart


MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 02/21/08 01:02 PM
flowerforyou (((Marina)))

CrazyPalindrome's photo
Thu 02/21/08 01:06 PM
Nice.

lizethmarina's photo
Thu 02/21/08 05:29 PM
Thanks MsTeddy flowerforyou

thank you, CrazyPalindrome flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Thu 02/21/08 05:33 PM
I like this one especially the ending

LAMom's photo
Thu 02/21/08 06:15 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Thu 02/21/08 06:21 PM
Very heartfelt, nicely written.:smile:

lizethmarina's photo
Thu 02/21/08 07:55 PM
Thanks KC, we share the same I also like the ending more than anything flowerforyou

LaMome, thanks to you too flowerforyou

Faded, thanks flowerforyou