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Edited by
lizethmarina
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Thu 02/21/08 12:56 PM
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I wanted to scream, find an answer, a reason, a why things happen the way they do
Inside the tired empty memories Inside the loneliness that fills my being In the uncertainty of the change that is to come, on the feeble feelings that will no longer come to be. I wanted to cry, find an answer, of where my broken heart would be I couldn't find anything, only the cruel reality of disillusion and the emptiness that love leaves behind Inside my hollowed soul where the broken pieces of me could be found Reluctant to come out, tired of loving you, tired of crying for you I screamed into the sunset that I loved you, just to see if you could hear me I just heard my own voice screaming back a thousand times that I loved you Crying inside the canyons of my soul, still asking why Alone in the inmensity of everything, I got lost, and your love no longer found me The walls rose up, and to your love, the entrance was denied My loveless heart no longer belonging to you But even then, if the echo calmed my tears, i would have stopped crying for you a long time ago. Marina F.M.L.H |
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(((Marina)))
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Nice.
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Thanks MsTeddy
thank you, CrazyPalindrome |
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I like this one especially the ending
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Very heartfelt, nicely written.
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Thanks KC, we share the same I also like the ending more than anything
LaMome, thanks to you too Faded, thanks |
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