Topic: We All Feel It Eventually
wickedlluccy's photo
Thu 02/21/08 12:22 PM
"REGRET"

Tis A thing ! that creeps & crawls
it drags your dreams up & down your halls

on fear we keep you weaned & fed
you evil architect of dread

I let you in, even offered you a seat
you gnaw at my soul, as if fresh meat

such a blat-ton, ugly, nasty thing
you break-n-chew on my freedom wings

I let you keep me in this place
never knowing or seeing a human face

a prison I have helped you to build
to house & keep my "Regret full" guilt

your only here cause I let you in
what's horrible most as I'll do it again

your a chamber of horrors, ugly & cruel
I'll not give in & let you rule

its my life to live until I die
so elsewhere go & cast your evil eye

I wish I knew a word or spell
to make you leave & burn-n-hell

be gone "Regret" your not wanted here
I'll not let you thrive on my fear !!!


~wicked~

CrazyPalindrome's photo
Thu 02/21/08 12:24 PM
Very nice... I especially liked the first 3 or 4 verses, they had nice imagery. Very well done, bravo!

jimz's photo
Thu 02/21/08 12:28 PM
drinker

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 02/21/08 12:34 PM
Bravo indeed! drinker drinker